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for Harvest Moon

by vbruce

schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. Why do I get the feeling that another body's been found? This is such a great story. I can't wait for more!
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
person Tazzy
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a lovely chapter and nice interaction between Hermione and Lucius. TOo bad there evening was ended with a scream... *cackles*
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Narcissa sounds like erm.... quite the airhead. lol Yeah, I said it. Liren just sounded like a sociopath from square freaking one. It's not torture it's practice! If it can scream in pain, you shouldn't hurt it. I'm rooting for Hermione, but I'm not sure if she'll all out beat arabella. Even draw maybe? Maybe... That poor girl... I'm rooting for her to get away, but I'm not holding much hope. Poor sheila.
person Tazzy
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh! Only two people. One's dead but missing and the other's a ghost....

*smirks* you dear, are evil.....
person KellyJCR
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well we finally see Severus in the mix. I want to believe that Lucien is the sole being behind this but it almost seems to easy. I know the potion and everything points to him but, I can't let myself believe that just yet. I have a feeling Arabella is involved although I do love her character. Can't wait to see what you have planned next. Well done!!!!
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Severus to the rescue! lol Fantastic update, can't wait to see if Lucius is finally going to be able to have a solid alibi what with all the aurors hanging around the Manor.
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woo! you found a way to bring Severus into it! Can a ghost give legal testimony? Or am I thinking like a muggle too much? I hope the victim can at least get one shot in at our killer, I'd hate for him to be completely unmarked.
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was messed up at the beginning - a serial killer wizard! wow!

Lucius sounds worried as he should be! I would think he has a good idea of who is doing this.