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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ara has some interesting talents. Not all of them sexual. Now our Aurors have motive,opportunity, and a suspect. Still, how to prove it? A psycho is bad enough--an intelligent and motivated psycho is worse. One who is getting inside help is a nightmare. Somebody go pour veritaserum down Narcissa's throat, already!
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha I knew it was the brother now I am wondering how and why did he fake his death. Loved the chapter and still enjoying reading the story.
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*snorts* That's one way to add to the excitement of Halloween. Nothing like a fresh corpse to liven up a party.
What could Lucius possibly want from Ara that a wizard or witch couldn't help with I wonder.
What could Lucius possibly want from Ara that a wizard or witch couldn't help with I wonder.
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Liren is pushing things along--how soon will Lucius track him down as he's obviously meant to do? Still, I'm not certain what Liren is really trying to accomplish. He can't take Lucius' place if he's arrested for murder and the Malfoy name is discredited. And it may be difficult to arise as himself after so many years. Unless... will hold that thought.
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Of course the last thing the victim saw was" Lucius" Malfoy!!! Oh Lucius is in trouble, poor dear! How he is going to prove that it wasn't him, i don't really know, but i'm sure that you do, lol!
One good thing out of this , is that he will know for sure that his brother is still alive..and kicking!
One good thing out of this , is that he will know for sure that his brother is still alive..and kicking!
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh. If it's who I think it is then Lucius could still be blamed. Gah! This is just suspenseful. I can't wait for more!!
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*takes a pause before she restarts reading chapter 15*
i'm sorry, i can't help but notice that twice so far, at least, you've slipped in Rocky Horror Picture Show names for the House Elves.
i love you. lol
*goes back to reading*
i'm sorry, i can't help but notice that twice so far, at least, you've slipped in Rocky Horror Picture Show names for the House Elves.
i love you. lol
*goes back to reading*
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i've decided to keep running reviews at the end of each chapter i read. When i saw again names from RHPS, and then remembered Narcissa's remark about getting Riff Raff from her brother, i thought, "Her brother is targeting Lucius?" But then the last sentence made my eyes go wide and i thought, "No way! Lirus was dead! O_O"
Ok, just keep reading, just keep reading, just keep reading, reading, reading, all you can do is read, read...
Ok, just keep reading, just keep reading, just keep reading, reading, reading, all you can do is read, read...
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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good work. I've really enjoyed this. I hope to see more soon because I'm dying to find out if I'm right about who the killer is. (I'm probably not. I never can figure out mysteries.)
Do you do chapter alerts? If so I would love to receive one. My email is tambrathegreat@yahoo.com
Do you do chapter alerts? If so I would love to receive one. My email is tambrathegreat@yahoo.com