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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am..enthralled, HP meets CSI, meets Bones..Please continue,, and quickly if you will. I must say that over all it is well writtenm wry, and detailed to perfection.. the tension slowly building is just a delicious temptation I cannot deny
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know i should review every chapter, just forgive me for not doing so. English is not my first language and sometimes it's a little hard to find the words to express my thoughts!that makes me a little lazy . There is no forgiveness for me!
I do love Draco's and Hermione's relationship,he seems to understand her very well,and she is Hermione of course, not always very open to other people's points of view.The world is still very much black and white to our Gryffindor. I always thought that that is one of the Slytherin's best qualities, the ability to understand the subtle nuances behind everything!
Hmm very promising what is to come...Lucius and to beautiful women... ;D
But Hermione being used like that for a trap...If Liren is anything like his brother... that doesn't sound good! And why Hermione? Why not Ara? Hmmmmmm....
I do love Draco's and Hermione's relationship,he seems to understand her very well,and she is Hermione of course, not always very open to other people's points of view.The world is still very much black and white to our Gryffindor. I always thought that that is one of the Slytherin's best qualities, the ability to understand the subtle nuances behind everything!
Hmm very promising what is to come...Lucius and to beautiful women... ;D
But Hermione being used like that for a trap...If Liren is anything like his brother... that doesn't sound good! And why Hermione? Why not Ara? Hmmmmmm....
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head* Lucius, that's not gonna solve anything.... really.
And nice to see what happened between Hermione and Harry. *snerks* and also nice to see her Slytherin side showing...
And nice to see what happened between Hermione and Harry. *snerks* and also nice to see her Slytherin side showing...
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I'm not exactly new to this site, but I registered for it just now because I wanted to review your story. Basically, I would give it three thumbs up if I had enough thumbs. It's sufficiently enjoyable that I can even pass over the use of the spelling "magick" with no more than a slight roll of the eyes. :) Some of the content (the forensics and some other details, not just the BDSM-related material!) has me curious about this talented author who seems to have such breadth and depth of knowledge (not to mention spelling and grammar so much better than most people's). More than just being knowledgeable, though, you're skilled at putting your knowledge to good use in service of your story. It adds quite a bit of flavour. As an example, you apparently have at least enough knowledge of Latin to make up spells, potions, etc., that fit in nicely with the canon ones. (OK, so that doesn't require a whole lot of Latin.)
I haven't nearly reached the last chapter (or the latest; don't even know if the story's finished), and I'm glad of it: still got lots to read, confident that I will be entertained. One detail that's got me curious is Lucius's decent treatment of the House-Elves (got a kick out of the RHPS references BTW): I hope we'll see an explanation somewhere along the line for his abuse of Dobby, since it seems that this is not the norm for him. (Is this part of how he has changed over the years? Was there something specific to Dobby that drove Lucius to abuse him? etc.)
For some reason I found the idea of Lucius as a switch to be especially plausible. Not sure why, though (and I don't usually tend to be a very intuitive person). I like the teenaged Lucius, Narcissa, and Liran, too. Young Cissy really does come across as a ditz. Oh, speaking of Narcissa's goofy nickname, I hope we're going to get a glimse of a teenaged Bellatrix. (If Azkaban turned her psycho, just think what adolescent hormones would do!)
Well, back to reading! Later dude.
I haven't nearly reached the last chapter (or the latest; don't even know if the story's finished), and I'm glad of it: still got lots to read, confident that I will be entertained. One detail that's got me curious is Lucius's decent treatment of the House-Elves (got a kick out of the RHPS references BTW): I hope we'll see an explanation somewhere along the line for his abuse of Dobby, since it seems that this is not the norm for him. (Is this part of how he has changed over the years? Was there something specific to Dobby that drove Lucius to abuse him? etc.)
For some reason I found the idea of Lucius as a switch to be especially plausible. Not sure why, though (and I don't usually tend to be a very intuitive person). I like the teenaged Lucius, Narcissa, and Liran, too. Young Cissy really does come across as a ditz. Oh, speaking of Narcissa's goofy nickname, I hope we're going to get a glimse of a teenaged Bellatrix. (If Azkaban turned her psycho, just think what adolescent hormones would do!)
Well, back to reading! Later dude.
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June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, Harry's turning over a new leaf during this Turning Moon! I hope he does something to redeem himself in Hermione's eyes. Ten years!! I'm not so sure Narcissa isn't covering something up, though. Draco and Hermione make a good team, but Lucius is the one she has on her mind. Stand firm, Hermione! Don't let those wizards out of your sight! Good chapter, moving the plot along. Glad you haven't put this one on the back burner.
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well i'm still here!
Let's see, is Narcissa a good actress or she really doesn't know? I still think there is someone else behind all this and i'm not sure that it is just Liren .Perhaps a certain Madam?? Hmm
So Hermione gets all nervous about Harry? Why care? He proved already that he is not a good friend. Perhaps 10 days later or even 10 months but 10 years? No, not a good friend. Not even a friend good or bad, if you think about it!
Isn't it a wonderful thing to work and deal with Slytherins? One learns a lot... heheh
Let's see, is Narcissa a good actress or she really doesn't know? I still think there is someone else behind all this and i'm not sure that it is just Liren .Perhaps a certain Madam?? Hmm
So Hermione gets all nervous about Harry? Why care? He proved already that he is not a good friend. Perhaps 10 days later or even 10 months but 10 years? No, not a good friend. Not even a friend good or bad, if you think about it!
Isn't it a wonderful thing to work and deal with Slytherins? One learns a lot... heheh
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, things are getting deeper....
RE your AN: did you mean NC-17 fics or Non-con? Sorry, it was confusing. Certainly, everyone should respect whatever you write. Weird that anyone would request something non-con, if that was what you meant. I could see someone asking for a bit of smut.
RE your AN: did you mean NC-17 fics or Non-con? Sorry, it was confusing. Certainly, everyone should respect whatever you write. Weird that anyone would request something non-con, if that was what you meant. I could see someone asking for a bit of smut.
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And the roller coaster hits the first check at the top of the rise. How will Lucius get Narcissa to admit involvement? Imperio? Veritaserum illegally administered? Send Severus to haunt her for a while? Ooh, there's an idea. And he can't be held to laws of evidence, either.
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Explosive!!! Please keep them coming!!!1