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Excellent. I look forward to the next chapter.

Wow so Hermione going to get a taste of DOM, I hope she doesn't mind it but stick to how she is at the moment, I like how she is. Looking forward to the next update

Oh, wow, Hermione gets to top Lucius?!?! You are wonderful and this story keeps getting better and better!I'm sure Lucius is going to enjoy this, not just the BDSM play but how this might work into a future for him and Hermione. If he's this much into the scene, it would be hard to be with Hermione in some sort of relationship if he had to leave a big part of himself out of it. But meanwhile, there are traps to bait. Excellent work, but too short. Alas.

This is cliffhanger only is a warning for the intense chapter behind this one.. I can wait!!!!!!!!!!!

Agh! Too short! that's like getting a movie and finding a coke commercial during the car chase! More, more more...wait, that's Luc's line, isn't it? What ever. Thanks for the compliment, but I do tend to over analyze things. You created the circumstances, i just keep trying to make sense of them.

Excellent. Looking forward to reading more.

Lucius' thoughts are becoming just as full of Hermione as hers are of him. I hope you're building toward a critical mass with that potential relationship. I take it that Liren isn't even in the UK or Ireland, but is still close enough to apparate to the scenes of his crimes. Sounds like Draco has no intention of getting off the case: I'm sure he wants his father's name cleared as much as to stop the gruesome murders. I noticed that you had Lucius pick up his wallet on the way to the Wicked Witch. There must be something there to buy--maybe an appropriate outfit for Hermione to pose as a play partner of Lucius to draw Liren out to kill her? Oooh, I hope Lucius gets to spank her! This story keeps getting better the more complex it gets. Consistently top notch writing. How rare, but welcome!

Please some smut!!!!!!!!! Yeah fire is coming I know but this is so cool.. So where is Larien.. in Narcissa's body? That is all so intense.. Keep them coming...

oh Darling, I don't know about anyone else but if you stop this now, I'll have to do something drastic. Like pout at you. Serious pouting mind you with both the big wet eyes and the quivering lower lip.

*purrs* Besides I want to see Lucious Lucius taken to task *cough* by those lovely ladies of his.

Tell Luc to check the estate on Skye, damn it!