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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It keeps getting more and more exciting. If I were Ara, since the wand wouldn't work, I'd snap it just in case. Fantastic update, I can't wait for more!
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope that Liren will be out for quite a while so that Ara can get far enough away to be safe.
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It is so much fun when every writer describe Hermione thinking on our imagination we can hear all the thoughts and the railing of it. It is to much fun.. Funny was the surprising ending for this chapter, funny funny funny... More please and sooner than later, TY...
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pan to the face awesome!!!!!!
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, how well I know the song of a #8 cast iron chicken skillet connecting with a thick skull! LOL, and no, I won't explain. Let's just say it leaves an impression on the recipient. So, he's disarmed and damaged, lovely! I'd actually forgotten the frying pan was used as a portkey, silly me. Even with magical healing, it will take him some time to recover, I'd say. Now, where is she and how fast can she get a message to Luc or Draco? Or is a certain blonde going to need a sudden bout of plastic wizardry?
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
snap the wand, snap the wand -- ARA be safe!
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Correction to my last review: the spoon was the culprit, she just had the pan in hand. Still loving this!
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's my theory blown... still reading though.
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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, noooo! Not Arabella! Please let her escape Liren's evil plans. I look forward to seeing more of the implications of Hermione and Lucius getting closer and even incorporating kinky play in their interactions, but really, let's get Ara out of danger first! Liren plays for keeps and no one knows where Arabella has gone. Loki, please keep her safe! Good work, Phoenix, no one saw that coming!
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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This hasn't even touched the levels of depravity and gruesome detail as American Psycho, so I'm good so far. And everybody is squarely in character, which is great.