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for Harvest Moon

by vbruce

schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SHE'S SAFE!!!!! OH THANK GOODNESS
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, I would never have thought of the Knight Bus, great job! Evidence, she brought back evidence, yay (much happy dancing)!! They can do something with that while the creep heals up and hopefully stays put long enough to catch. Does this mean we don't get the bondage party with Lucius and Hermione? I would be VERY put out if that is so. (pouting in extremis) You made my weekend with this.
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Short but excellent! So the murderer is on Skye! Now to get to Lucius and Hermione and report what she had seen and done. The good guys are closing in!
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is flipping brilliant. I really hope Ara doesn't get killed I like her. Since it is important for the story, I assume she is going to be the next victim.
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's what I'm talking about! Fucking crack that bitch in his skull. Oh, I have a new role model. *rummages for her cast iron skillet* Glad to see Hermione could let go in all this too. Lucius is obviously happy about all that too. I freaking skillet! Let's see your wand beat that. Omfg..... I'm still cackling...
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh i do fell jealous of Hermione right now! *sigh*

So Arabella got herself caught by evil Liren! We do stupid reckless things when we should be careful!

But she's a fighter! I just hope you don't get her killed! I like her, and Lucius and Hermione need her...*smirk*
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know as well as I do that taboos are only there to reinforce ignorance and fear

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schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*shrieks with laughter* Oh that's *BEAUTIFUL*!!!! Teach them to underestimate a muggle.....
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A small step for Liren, a big swing for all womankind. Go Ara!! This was a most delightful and informative chapter! Excellent writing--even more excellent imagination! Lucius' thoughts about Hermione, Hermione's thoughts about herself, Ara's courage and wisdom...you are definitely in fifth gear, now. Oh, Ara, be careful! He's an evil, evil man!