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for Harvest Moon

by vbruce

schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh she's safe with Draco and Luna.

Luna is out of this world, lol, she surprises even Draco!

I just hope they get in touch with Lucius and Hermione soon...
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm so happy to see that Arabella made it safely back to the Ministry and was able to turn her evidence over to the appropriate (though officially off the case!) people to do something with it immediately. But I'm confused about why the wearer of the mask, if he were in Skye, would seek treatment at St. Mungoe's (it's in London, right?). Or seek treatment at all, if it would expose him. Looks like Hermione's date is about to be cut short, but it's worth it to stop the killer. Excellent chapter, but left me wishing it were longer (your writing is so enjoyable!)
person Tenar10r
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I had avoided reading this story for quite a while, the premise just didn't catch me. I noticed that you
wrote other stories that I had enjoyed very much and began to wonder what I was missing. Now I wish I had started reading
this one at the first chapter!
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! I've been wondering when we'd get one. lol Fantastic, I'm glad she made it out and that they're finally on track to clearing Lucius's name. I can't wait for more!!
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Short, sweet and good! You're early posting, aren't you? I wasn't expecting anything until at least Monday. Loved Luna asking Ara to join them, sounds just like her, hee-hee. Evidence, I just love evidence, it makes the world go 'round.
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Anon is me, got bumped off again during my review, sorry.
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okk I am in the brink of a heart attack here.... Please a break through just a tiny one please but it is very good...
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hermione and Lucius should have trusted their instincts.

I just love the way he keeps calling her Mine, and how she doesn't completely surrender to him.

Bright Arabella. I just hope she continues to be in luck and cautious. I really don't want any harm to come to her.
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
TY TY TY for saving Ara..... more please!