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for Harvest Moon

by vbruce

person Criosdan
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gods, I love this story. Beeing a big HG/LM shipper it's great so see them falling in love. And the thriller elenemts are so exciting.
Please don't let us wait too long.
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hm, interesting and confusing... both genders? looking forward to more >D
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What what WHAT?! A hermaphrodite, you say? My my... then that would mean Lucius is too, and I doubt Hermione bargained for that much. I mean, a kink streak is one thing, but two genders? That's a hell of an adjustment.
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Although this chapter was all conversation and not action, I feel as if things are moving along. These characters treat each other as friends, and together they are working out a mystery that one alone couldn't solve. Well written dialogue, and it seems as if part of clearing Lucius' name is also clearing the way for him and Hermione to get together. I think all your readers would welcome that! Thanks for updating!
person Tenar10r
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More please!
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Am I allowed to gloat a little? Whee! Science is so damn cool! even fictional science. Now I can happily spend my weekend wondering how you're gonna torture us waiting for the next update! LOL.
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How disconcerting it can be to agknowledge love!

I see Narcissa there! She was never loved that way!

And i'm very curious to know what was it that Luna found in those tests!

I so wish you could join us in the OWL House competition! I love your story and your writting and i would love for everybody else to read it!
person Tenar10r
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh! Another cliffie!!!
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, Buble is going to be queried for information? Nice touch, dear. As for our perpetrator, Vengeance can cause all kinds of blindness to crop up. Waiting very eagerly!
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ja, I think I'd be pissed if I got a cast iron skillet to the mug too ;p However, he kinda DESERVED it, so.... perhaps someone should inform him. Can't believe he was talking after that BS. Poor Lucius. And the girls. I'd be wigged out too. I guess everyone should take a lessen from the story: don't go to sex clubs and enjoy hot blondies.... Oh, I hurt my soul saying that. I'm dying to see what Liren is thinking up next (literally since I damaged my soul for the sake of crappy humor). More pls!