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by vbruce

schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Always late to check the updates i'm afraid!
Forgive me.

They still assume that it's a man turning into a woman (that is brilliant by the way) but what if it is a woman using Liren's hair?
...Can a dead person's hair be used for polijuice? I assume so.

I love Snape, dead or alive, he is always imposing and your Snape is just perfect! :D

Ah, love! Yes,something hard to admit!
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Getting caught up after an absence is fun: more chapters to read at once! Your writing is excellent and I'm quite fond of this story. If Hermione judges the idea of Lucius being in love with her a new one, from whence had she thought the little nuances like gentle strokes on her face, meeting of foreheads and kisses came? She's being dense though I doubt she is aware. I hope she examines her own heart and finds an answer there that is more than fondness or lust. Lucius is justified in his worry for her--Liren could be anywhere--or anyone. Anyone.
person Tazzy
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* and a new twist is added....

oh yeah, and possibly polyjuice....

*applauds* Brava! Brava!
person KMac
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Here's my theory. It's Cissy. All along, it's been her.

When she left Lucius (or vice versa, can't remember) she went batty (possibly with help from Liren's ghost) and stole Liren's body. She's been polymorphing into him to have the strength to kill all the hussy's *her* husband has been dallying with. Liren's ghost goes along with the choice of victims because he knows it would hurt dear ol' twin brother the most. And that "conversation" that Draco overheard? Well, Norman Bates would have talks with his mother, wouldn't he?

After all, the hair just has to have dna... no one said the donor had to still be alive.
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved >D
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, would Snape's warning be classed as a 'dead' threat? (Sorry, couldn't resist, not that I really tried...) I like Nightmare's assessment, but think that Liren's been in Cissy a lot longer than anyone knows and is 'borrowing' the body to get his own work done. I get the feeling that there were a LOT more people in the Malfoy marriage bed than Lucius ever knew about. Would that qualify as incest and necrophilia as well as slash? Eww.
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... I can't wait to see what happens next. But it seems hard to find someone who is almost just like you in someways. I wonder when he is realize that his ex wife is helping his brother, which makes me really think is his son real his or his brother's? Love the story by the way and I just started reading it a few days ago.
person Tazzy
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers and paws* It's getting good! Please don't leave it there!!!
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Actually bubble was making perfect sense; it just sounds garbled when we don't have all the reference points. Kind of like listening to Luna on a bad day.
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lucius.... and cloves..... *sighs and passes out* <3 <3 <3