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I know I shouldn't laugh becuase of the seriousness of this chapter, but that last line was just *hilarious*!

*claps before settling in to wait for more*

I assume Andrew is talking about 'Lord' Draco Malfoy, not Lucius with the tractor remark, otherwise a whole and very bizarre slew of plot bunnies just stampeded through my dazzled and confused mind. That and that stupid country song 'She thinks my tractor's sexy'. Or Draco just overdid the Slytherin colors in his robes for the evening. Now to find Lucius... tracking charms can be negated, Muggle electronics would overload from the magical fields, blood magic is illegal. That leaves Owl, House elf or Ara's bag of tricks, plus Liren's probably going to want to gloat while torturing his brother. He'd want Lucius conscious for that, so there's a bit of hope that he'll take his time and believe himself safe for at least a few hours. When is Bubble going to show up again?

dayam... they walked into that one. Gotta loathe Polyjuice.

*grins and bounces on the edge of the seat* Can't wait to see what happens next, love!

(can I find it hilarious that the vereification words are "apparatus extreme" for this chapter?)

Yay, loved! Hope Harry is prepared to deal with the situation...

Please caught him this time is getting to much for my heart to bare............ LOL

You sneaky....I didn't see that one coming. Brilliant! If he cuts anything important off Lucius I will extremely upset, you do realize that, right? The hair is optional, it can grow back. I am curious as to who's head it was in the jar he was looking at in the last chapter, though. Now I have to wait a whole month for the next update, argh! You should write professionally, you'd be on the NY times best-seller list forever.

Loved :D

*smiles* I'm always willing to be a sounding board for you and gently encourage your writing. *hides the spear and polearms with an innocent smile*

And Luna ha some very valid points. It's nice to see things from her perspective, no matter how she "sees" the world through Wonderland glasses.

And there is the first crack in his pattern. Up until now he's been very careful not to underestimate his brother, but he thinks he can foresee everything they will do. He's only eighteen, mentally. He has missed out on many years of life experiences that the others have gone through. Good god, it's adolescent hubris! Why didn't I think of that before? He probably hasn't even physically changed. NO adolescent can resist the chance to create a little drama. Oh, they've got him if they do it right.

And the plot thickens! I think it's somewhere around the density of pea soup at the moment. *grins*

Glad Tazura's calling the shots and letting Lucien get the party ready for her. Harry can be a bit of an ass from what I can see, but we're also seeing him through other people's eyes at the moment.

*applauds* Bravo! I await the next chapter eagerly!!!