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by aestheticsofhate

schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Cute story! I initially thought from reading the review the Draco was the one to drug him but I like that he wasn't... The story could use a bit of beta-ing but other than that it's pretty good! If you do want to give the beat-ing a go , you could always just email me or something and I'll do it... I've got a three month holiday now before Uni starts again! (haha! That explains why I actually updated one of my stories for like the first time this year!!!)
Let me know,
Stef
person butterpie
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, yeah that was hot! That was just brill, and well what can I say except more, so please continue!
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow there so needs to be another chapter! like what happens next? and detailed sex! very detailed