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by staceyh3

schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why not make it threesome, if you having trouble choosing, and with Harry have some creature blood in him, and it will come out when he reach his 18th birthday. Also, Harry was born in July 1980, Light was born in February 1986, L Lawliet was born in Oct 31, 1979, and the starting date of Death Note is 2004, so that should make Harry 6 years older that Light making him 22 years old, and did you made Harry wear a glumor(?), so it made him look younger.

Anyway, nice story.