rate_review Reviews

WOW, terrific. I loved how you inserted those canon bits into your story from Bella's POV. And I don't know exactly how to describe it, but I feel your proze has almost a poetic quality in it. It's the rhytmn which lays in these bits. Ugh... well, there is a correct word for it, it's right at the tip of my tongue, but I can't reach it. Most annoying.
Anyway, I do love your one shots. They are all very powerful and I applaud you for it. I never seem to be able to get a one shot quite right. I tried writing them, but they always turn into multi-chapter fics with me. Oh well, I guess as my former professor used to say "too wordy, Nerys, and quit adding all those bleeding adjectives." LOL
You don't have that issue. I am envious. XD
Loved it, loved it, loved it.

omg i hate u!! u made me cry.
it was amazing though, just really sad.

Awww, I like it!
Good job ;o)

LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! Love the pairing. Love the emotional depth. Love the story! Brilliant stuff!! :)

Aw Lady V, this was wonderful!

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Excellent work!! I must say that although I am not a Voldemort fan and definitely not a Bellatrix fan, her infatuation with him shows through quite well here.

You;ve done brilliantly!!!

Love and hugs...
Lady B*

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Nice stuff much more like your normal writing style! I liked it a lot!

Now get to work on that Ron/Hermione!....ROFLMBFAO!.....Only kidding!

That was very good.