rate_review Reviews

Excellent chapter! Very well developed, and I like the subtle style it has. The ending with the blanket corner tug then remark about toothbrush was classic. He doesn't really seem to mind her invading his space, almost hinting that he wants her there. I also like Hermione's panic attack and breakdown. I want to know more about why she felt it necessary to leave Mungos other than 'caring too much.' That's like the line, 'I'm retiring to spend more time with my family' you hear from politicians right before scandal breaks.

Happiness indeed!

Oh other random thought. Came across this quote, '...the owl of Minerva only flies at dusk.' from Hegel the philosopher. I suppose that's supposed to be deep and some junk.

All hail chapter 3!!! (And the masses cheered)

I always thoguht that if she ever cornered him years later about his snide remark about her teeth, which might have been a seminal moment for her, he'd probably need a reminder. I mean honestly, how many cruel and cutting remarks does he make on an average day (including on essays)? I wonder what you've got planned. And can't wait to find out. And what jar in what amounts dropped into an over-boiled potion. *Shakes head* Hermione should have gone on vacation as originally planned. Her head is not in the game, is it?

Chapter 4-

Yea! Snape! (Cheerleaders with pompoms dance in background) Fastideous keeper of meticulous records. And what's this?? He further admits other blunders? Wow. Original! I wonder what the effect of turtle eyes will be. Nothing? Everything? Something worthy of Gred and Forge Weasley??? Plot thickens. Poor Remus... and here I thought lab rat was Pettigrew's animagus form.

Eager awaiting more chapters to devour.

Yup, I am quite sure I am going to love this story! I like stories where Hermione and Severus use their brains together, especially when it is well written as this. I also like that you don't have them "flawless", they are quite human and at the same time absolutely "our" Hermione and Severus, fictional war heroes and brainy:-))

Wow. Okay, I'm interested in this story now! I can't wait to read more! Please update again and soon!

Tiffany

Excellent writing. I like what direction it seems to be going in. It's interesting so far and I can't wait to see what's next!


P.S.-- Not to worry. I was joking about the hostages. It gets frustrating some times when they don't write a response. I joke to blow off the steam. It was that or pull my hair out. I like my hair. So heard any good jokes lately?

A very interesting, intriguing and well written first chapter, I look forward to read more. I liked that you had Severus still as Severus, but a Severus who aknowlegde Hermiones intellekt. He have every intention to "exploit" said intellekt of course, but that aint necessary a bad thing:-) Hermione will most likely enjoy the challenge. I am also pleased that she is still Granger, as an avid hater of the Ron/Hermione pairing (how any sain being could even in a fictional story think of those two as suitable as lowers and a married couple is beyond me) I prefer Ron to be only a very platonic friend or a very ditched ex-boyfriend.
All in all, I am very much looking forward for the next chapter!

Great start!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

So that's how you get more reviews? Wow. Is there a shop I could go to for them or what? LOL! Great going so far. I can't wait to read more.

P.S. Thanks for the reviews that you left on my story "The Reluctant Detectives". It means a lot to me. I wish more people were as diligent as you have been about doing so. I'm nearly at wits end! Really, where do I get those hostages again?