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for Loves What Vanishes

by Lomonaaeren

schedule August 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was... whaat.... wow.... did draco just? omfg!
person Angel_Kayohisura
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
D: Oh man, I knew a warning was an unhappy ending, but that was far from what I expected. :/ Well, I suppose Draco is happy... But really, the end was very sad. It wasn't too hard to figure out what was going on, despite the jumping around. I love Harry's last few lines at the end, saying how he had dreamed it, the other bit about dreams not interfering with Draco's life, and then him existing for Draco's sake. Very nicely done of you. ^__^ Very interesting that Draco's dream had so many ...difficulties in it. Being disowned, problems with his career, Harry losing his, etc. Just a stray thought.
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm slow and retarded because I know there is something more here and I'm missing it. This is beautiful and I want to figure it out. Give me time.
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very sad, indeed. Hopefully, Draco made his potion correctly -- and hopefully, he'll find what he was seeking.

Like so many of your other works, I enjoy the English literature references. If you ever run out of snippets to work from, you might try Austen: "For what do we live, but to make sport for our neighbors, and laugh at them in our turn?"

Thanks for so many wonderful stories.
person SP777
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all, that was interesting.

Second of all, I need a footnote..and a huge clue with bells on..about the ending.
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sad!
person Dezra
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco. My heart is breaking for him.
person yun
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was all in draco's dream? in draco's reality within his potion induced comatose sleep? well, i have to admit you really could write some real unhappy ending. why did he chose that over the possibility of the real thing, even as farfetch as it seem at the time before he took the potion? wasn't that kinda like muggle opting for euthanasia? even if someday muggles really could advance into dream engineering technology, i don't think i have the courage to even sample it. thank you for this very sad story. it matched my mood today.
person yun
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was all in draco's dream? in draco's reality within his potion induced comatose sleep? well, i have to admit you really could write some real unhappy ending. why did he chose that over the possibility of the real thing, even as farfetch as it seem at the time before he took the potion? wasn't that kinda like muggle opting for euthanasia? even if someday muggles really could advance into dream engineering technology, i don't think i have the courage to even sample it. thank you for this very sad story. it matched my mood today.
person womo
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude. i AM confused. random reader theories: I'm guessing harry left draco (he died? from that thing that made him vomit), and draco went love-sick crazy took a potion that made him into snow white, except now he can stay in lala land forever with a dream harry. i guess it makes sense with the quote from hamlet. gosh i read that play so many times. i could even identify it was ophelia's part: the scene where she tries to give flowers to claudius/the wife and sings her flower songs. since she went crazy when she heard hamlet died, and drowned herself, i'm guessing, in a way, draco reflects ophelia. in terms of looks i always think of draco as hamlet (brooding, witty, sharp, etc.)...

anyway, good oneshot! is there hope of you telling us what it's about in the near future?