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for The Reluctant Detectives

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I like new chapters. I'm rather tickled by Lucius, which isn't common for me, I'm not his biggest fan.
-TQW
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I believe the show referenced is Dragnet, what was the line? "Just the facts, ma'am."
person Mia
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am enthralled by your story. Its chapters are wonderful little joys of warmth and intrigue whenever they are new. Thank you so very much. I am thoroughly enjoying your story.

~Mia
person Lady Disdain
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting ;) I like the relationship between Snape and Hermione., good job!
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, bloody hell! They're never going to catch a break, are they? LOL. Major laughage at Snape calling Ron an "obsequious little shit." Could be my favorite thing ever, honestly. -TQW
person makaem
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! Why haven't I been reading this story? Temporary insanity I guess.
person Voracious reader
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay, somebody has what we call the 'self-made hero' complex. What better way to get the attention you feel you've been denied than to create the situation? Loving it so far, and yes, still hating Ron as a complete git. Nice job!
person KellyJCR
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This one seems to be taking its time as far as plot. I do like the relationship Sev and Hermione have going. I am really curious to see if Potter will show his head aftar all. Well done!!!
person DawnEB
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't often review, but I just had to say how much I'm enjoying your story. I'm not too sure about the way the student suicide seems to have been glossed over almost as if it were a minor event, but on the whole this has me looking forward to the next installment. Is it already written/outlined, or is it a WIP? This is one of the stories I'd hate to have fizzle out before the end :)
person onyx85
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read all the chapters you've posted so far and I'm hooked! I can't wait to see what happens next and how everything unfolds. Great story!