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for The Reluctant Detectives

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Must be the inbreeding.
person mia madwyn
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love her bed routine, especially Severus waiting patiently for her to finally roll over and snuggle.

Katie Bell? Priceless, especially Severus knowing she'd want it explained/demonstrated later.

I'm really enjoying this story. Good job!
person Anon
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol..that last bit was to funny,,im steal laughing...lol..lmao...great story so far, i like the set up and a the plot so far..its getting intense now..love it
person makaem
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How long until everyone knows to clear their throat before entering the room? Fabulous chapters!
person mageemi
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, really great story. I just discovered this (don't know how I missed spotting this tale before)and read the whole thing tonight. I especially love the interactions of Severus and Hermione, can't wait for more.
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao that was fantastic! i really hope that Ran gets put in his place
person Mia
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you. I want to marry you and have all of your squalling, hilarious children. Not really.

But seriously love, best. chapter. ever. 15 feet this time? Classic. You cheered me up, and I really needed it. Thank you dear.

~Mia
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know what's sad? Your story makes me feel like a petulant child. I love the length of the chapters, the fun and humor of each update, the characters and their many emotions and quirks. I love that each chapter moves the story forward a bit, but not too fast. But, you know what I don't like? They end. :-( See...I'm such a child. lol Okay, I will stop whining and wait for you to update again. :-) Thank you for this fun story!! HG4eva
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely in love with this story! You update often, you have several chapters at once, each chapter is fun, funny, intriguing, and in some way or other, touching. I am glad Hermione's problem was discovered, and I hope Harry's can be dealt with, as well. And, he and Ginny aren't married?! After all this time? After all she gave up for him? What a selfish pig! (Not really, I do love him, but in this case...) ARGH!!! But, Severus and the way he treats Hermione...beautiful.

A job really well done and I look forward to more really soon. :-) Thanks! HG4eva
person makaem
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a perfect chapter! You even made me forget there is a serial bomber.