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for The Reluctant Detectives

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was really great, i loved the concept brought back memories of the CSI stories i use to read
person Voracious reader
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well done, and now I'm going to miss it, now that it's over.
person shelagh
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bravo!!!
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was fanatstic! its so CSI-y i love it
person Amara
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hair is essentially keratin, in other words a protein. Unless that "clipping" was actually *plucked* from the baby's head, you'd have no cells to get DNA from. This wouldn't be as jarring if you hadn't specifically gone to the trouble of mentioning all those books Hermione consults to double-check; about ten seconds on google would have given you that same information.
person makaem
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was a blast to read. And your daily updates spoiled us.
person damela
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has been amazing! Thank you SO much!
person Tenar10r
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I'd turn "Hero" into a Squib and make him be a bedpan orderly for St Mungo's for the rest of his life with magically imposed house-arrest.
person Jaden Snape
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hermione as a CSI. Hermione as Grissom. Hmmm. I loved it. Very well written and easy to read. Thank you.
person Voracious reader
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you do this story; you should write mystery novels! I'd buy one for sure.