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for The Reluctant Detectives

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“Why just checking to see if they aren’t transgendered must take hours alone!”

LOL!

“Because unlike you, I masturbated.”

2^LOL!
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“She’s clinically depressed and Mr. Potter is hiding away from the world. They need help. They did your work. Stop giving them medals and start helping them.”

Well said! Funny though how Severus carefully avoids mentioning his own need for a therapist. Preferably a ghost therapist that he can't Hex into oblivion.
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I do so love your take on Dumb & Dumber!
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“Oh,” she whispered weakly. “But Ron said that you…” She frowned. “That you were still in love with him and were just waiting for him to leave me.”

Heather must be real dumb if she still stayed with Ron after he said that - then again, you'd have to be truly dumb (like Jo) to like Ron.

"You can't fix stupid."

How patently untrue. There is nothing wrong with Ron that a guillotine couldn't fix.
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“You mean with those little metal thingies that they showed me? They cost too much. Merlin, I can barely afford to feed my wife and kids as it is!”

How sad is that? Let me count the ways ...

Hero is a most marvellous villain btw
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great fun to read. I like seeing Hermione in a role like Kate Beckett (Castle) or Olivia Dunham (Fringe) or Dana Scully. Severus makes a great sidekick. I wonder what a poster of them would look like? Hermione a step forward with her wand extended, looking around warily, while Snape stands behind her inviting anyone to attack so that he can make them wish he'd just Hexed their balls off...
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story was lots of fun to read. Thanks!
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this lovely story, I enjoyed every minute of it!
person Aurette
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! I am thinking along the lines of mebbe you doing more mysteries with our Fav Duo? Excellent story, and enjoy the holidays as well!
person mia madwyn
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an entertaining story! Much fun, and a happy ending. Thank you for sharing it!