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for The Reluctant Detectives

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person Tsukee39
schedule August 17, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Bravo vraiment excellent j'ai adorée et été tenue captive du début à la fin !

schedule April 5, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Fun read!

person wudelfin
schedule February 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great plot, thanks so much for sharing.
person Kim
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Im not trying to be a witch or rude or anything but I noticed in this story and the one or two others of yours that I have read (great job by the way) that you made one little spelling mistake. It was the only one that I noticed; opposed is supposed to be spelled with an o not an a. Other than that your work is amazing. Keep it up.
person wiccan
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah...Nick and Nora with sex. I missed Asta though...was Crookshanks gone? Lovely, wonderful and fun story. Great job!
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not once have I ever asked you to come back. And what with everything that is going on, I won’t. But I resent the fact that you think that everything on this fucking planet is about you.

I like that she's finally standing up to Harry.
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This included a few gay men’s guides to fellatio. Her reasoning behind reading them being that if there was any group on the planet that knew what was good as far as sucking a cock was concerned, it would be a gay man.

lol! that's actually true! Not that I've read such books, but the bi guy who taught me could certainly have written one ;-)
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“True,” she said, looking straight at him as she repeated what she had said the first time.

LOL

He nodded. “True, but at least my so called good friends didn’t abandon me when all was said and done.”

Glad someone's there to point out the obvious

“He is a good boy,” she whispered. “But if he ever wants to be a man, he must pull that thick head of his out of his ass.”

Glad she agrees!

“You listen to me, you obsequious little shit,” he growled into the receiver. “I will rip your innards out through your throat keeping you alive so that I may torture you for hours there after if you call this number with any sort of idiotic temper tantrum again. Am I understood?”

I think I just wet myself. Still unsure of the precise nature of the bodily fluid involved.
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ever watch Fringe? It's on hulu. The detective's boss - Phillip Broyles - looks like Shacklebolt and speaks like Snape. He's awesome.
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love seeing Lucius not in charge... I wish fanfic writers wouldn't treat the poncey (not-so-)little fain