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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 2. Nice...OK, I'm glad you gave more information about why she's doing what she's doing. The attraction between her and Ron is really nice...lol@how much...oh boy...excited about what goes down in Ch. 3.
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice, real nice...loved their first time...very hot. I like how you write Ron...I picture him being large as well : ) and aww, he gets to stay the night : )
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch. 4. Hmm, I almost envy Pansy, even though as you've shown, she's sad about the consequences of the life she's chosen. I do wonder where this is going, but before that, I can't wait to see the threesome. I wonder what Harry's reaction will be to Ron's suggestion...heh. So Ron is single? I hope he's not lying. The bath was so romantic and hot at the same time.
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol@Ron and Harry's conversation. Aww...so they've both been looking to do the threesome thing for awhile. I like that, because it rings true of people looking for one. I like how you're showing another side to Pansy and her writing interests. I think she has quite a story to tell. heh. I think I know where this is going but I can't wait to see it played out.
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice first time threesome for the boys and her. : ) so Harry and Ron don't mind loving up on each other either? this is gonna be interesting..I wonder if she let Harry stay the night anyway?
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice and sweet. I absolutely loved it. Keep up the good work.
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. I love the way Ron and Pansy's relationship is progressing, I love the ending of the last chapter. Can't wait to see how Pansy will confront Ron with the facts that Harry told her. Keep up the good work.
P.S. I loved the sex scene between Harry/Pansy/Ron. It was so beautiful.
P.S. I loved the sex scene between Harry/Pansy/Ron. It was so beautiful.
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool Story. I loved the ron/pansy/harry seen.
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way this is going. You write Pansy pretty well, I like the way you don't make her life a living hell. I just hope you don't make Ron and Harry too unsympathetic. Please keep up with the good work.
P.S. Thanks for your review for my fic, it really meant a lot to me. It might interest you to know that I'm working on a sequel. I still need to proof read it, so hopefully I'll post it soon.
P.S. Thanks for your review for my fic, it really meant a lot to me. It might interest you to know that I'm working on a sequel. I still need to proof read it, so hopefully I'll post it soon.
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Good start. Can't wait to read more.