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for Working Girl

by ronsmistress

person mag7ical
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favs of your Ron/Pansy stuff. Loved it.
person anncee
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love your stuff, just stumbled upon this little beauty. Just had a quick note that caught my attention, near the beginning of chapter 13 you wrote "Hermione said, she
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 6. Awwww! that's so sweet of Ron....I hope this works out..
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooops, the last one was for ch. 7...this is for Ch. 8. Hermione's sweet, I guess she's mature enough to move past the old rivalry? I wonder how Pansy's friends and family will feel about this book, oh but her parents are dead right? I wonder if they'll be a backlash too? lol@Harry for making sure there's no names listed. so glad Ron doesn't want to share her again, and yay, he's always liked her, that's sweet.
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 9. BEAUTIFUL and very HOt. I loved that....very nice : )
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 10. You would benefit from a Beta. There have been a few spelling and grammar errors throughout, but this chapter has the most....the chapter was really sweet though, I like Ron and Pansy's musings about each other, and the conversation as she gave her walking papers. lol
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 11. HOT!!! Glad she's getting settled in ...heh. lol
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 12...oh wow, who knew her job would be so helpful to the Auror investigation. Makes perfect sense though. Ron's so sweet : )
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Chapters 12-16. I'm so glad that guy was caught! What a bum. I did have smile that after Ron told Pansy about what they found they went to make love. lol. Sex cures all things eh..And yay for the book coming out! I love Ron's intro...so sweet and just powerful : )
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is interesting, I'd be interested in knowing more about how pansy's family and friends feel about her being a hooker. This seems so far off from the upbringing of a pure-blood girl, even if her parents were murdered because of their role in the war. I'm enjoying the Pansy/Ron stuff though...and it seems there's some Pansy/Ron/Harry to come? Sounds fun...