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schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow. Good grief you covered a hell of a lot in this chapter. harry's come out to mio's parents about their relation ship, his titles, age of consent, future family plans and so on... about the only thing that didn't really get mentioned was Mio's parents 'clean up' activities and Harry's necromancer nature... If or when they do find out I'm sure they;ll be able to accept it sooner or later. after all, Mio's pareentss are predators too.

I feel a bit sorry for James and Frank since they miss out on the ssexual healing bit.

hey, if it's common place among the pure blood families for parents to train their children sexually, does that mean if a son or daughter prefered their own sex the appropriate parent would step in, or would they still be expected to go forth and do thier duty?

Antoine and Mari got a pretty full business disclosure as well. Hary seems to be making some very good allies.

Feel;s mildly interesting in whatever Sophie's speciality might be.

wow, let it never be said Harry can't multitask. Thinking deep thoughts on the future while getting it on. Well, i suppose necromancers are part of the cycle of life and death so it wouldn't be surprising that he'd be getting urges to create life (ie being randy as hell) as well as take it and clean up ghost residue and such.

Well, finally the Hallows are getting mroe than a passing mention. Hhe's going to be cursing dumbles six ways from sunday when he finds the old prick's been holding back. that cloak is his dammit.

And he's still planning for the future business wise. snorts, as if he didn't have enough money alread. lol.
Still, it's nice he thought of his psuedo parents pleasure, I'm sure they'll utterly enjoyt themselves.

Yay harry! You bring dumble dim down hardcore. wooohoooo!

About draco though... if his re training doesn't take, can we minonise him. He'd make someone a terriffic bitch.

Reading your story is like eating a thick hearty stew. I flick through a chapter first to get the gist of it (slurping up the watery bits) and the savor the rest slowly before i review (eating the rest) so i appologies if it takes me a bit to review. ^^
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I cant wait to see what happens a the Flemelles. Also I wonder what you are going to do with Ginny. I think you should give her to Neville or just make her a pet for one of Harrys servents.

Thanks for wriiting
MPF
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A few side questions...
1. the baubles gained from the Lestranges deaths, will they see use?
2. Is Harry cumming in his prize girls and if so, will they also get addicted to his cum? Or do they need repeated and constant exposure for that?
person Kenobi
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dude! This was one hell of a sexy chapter. The sex was well written.

You a guy or women? Sexy writing regardless!
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
is there any woman out there who wouldn't become Harry's eager hole?
The interaction with Gabbie is adorable. ty for another chappie.
Its hard to keep the story moving with all the sexy times but you're managing. Kudos.
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey? if it's normal for a mother to train her son (Lily is hot, Hot HOT) why hasn't Cissa started with Draco. While a person can be trained with pain a lone, a combo of pain and pleasure usualy gets faster results (also, while i can understand she's a bit distracted having Bella back, she appears to be letting Draco's training slide in favour of getting it on with Bella and day dreaming of Harry. I really dun wanna see Drac die. *pouts )
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait to see what Harry's Animagus is.
As for Draco, maybe if they use pleasure and pain on him and break him just a lil, he'll stop being such a twat. His training ahs started late so it's not entirely his fault, but hopefully he can be salvaged.
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sighs. Oh Fluer u silly, spoiled wench. This is going to be one hard, tough lesson for her.
schedule March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ain't it nice when a plan comes together... or in this case appears to have fallen inti Harry's lap.
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i'd just like to say...
U ROCK!
Gray, on his own side, RAVENCLAW? Harry. Neva read anything like that before. Kudos
and the other story is pretty awsome too, Screw Dumbles and Voldie I say, they both suck balls.
at any rate, are we gonna see some more woderfully grusome, necromatic based messes soon? oh please x 3
and thanks for not rushing the plot