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for Just the One Thing

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person Angie30
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!! Happy Thanksgiving
person Larrabee
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A pleasure to read. As always... but I have to say, you always leave me wanting more, whether it be, details or a longer story. LOL.

Kudos on the grammar.

And Happy Thanksgiving.

All the best,
Elaine
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
brilliant, loved it
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was good; tender, charming, and even (somewhat) plausible. Not enough detail to cause an argument, and plenty of humor. I love the idea of Fred and George!
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know what I am grateful for: You writing and submitting this fantastic story, I loved it!!!
person Anita
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! So cute. I especially like that you had my favorite men in there and didn't have them killed off. I like it when Sev and Hermione are very grateful!!!
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great little story. I loved it.

Tiffany
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?