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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOooooo! I wanted more! LOL
loved this fic
loved this fic
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh lovely smut. Am expecting Lucius to pop up at any minute!
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start to a great story. I can't wait to read more! Update soon.
Tiffany
Tiffany
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! The bit with Harry & Oliver coming out of the guest bedroom was great! And of course, I loved Hermione/Severus. I can't wait to see what you have planned next.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had to remind myself to take a breath.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mmm... that was hot! Great job!
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting story. I like the sort of submissive you've made Hermione. I've read a few dom/sub stories and they all make her a seem weak, helpless, and completely unable to think for herself. I like the idea that she can be bossy and assertive outside the house, rather than needing to be told what to do every second of the day.
And the Sirius twist!! OMG loved it. Though I can see it happening in my own mind, its great to see it written.
Enough chatter.. loving the story and can't wait for the next installment!
And the Sirius twist!! OMG loved it. Though I can see it happening in my own mind, its great to see it written.
Enough chatter.. loving the story and can't wait for the next installment!
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent backstory work. The implications of the risks in a D/s environment for a beginner are many and yes, dangerous if the match is incorrect. I am very much enjoying this, and will wait for more!
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dun, dun, dun!!! Lol this is wicked funny... i hope that it wasn't meant to be serious, 'cuz I can't make it be.. anyways, I really like this.. so yeah, keep writing!!
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LE GASP!!! Update? Please?