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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey just writing to say...MORE PLEASE :P I really like how you keep Snape true to his character while opening him up slightly, making him the guardian of Ellie hehe poor Snape. I've loved it all but the most recent chapter was really cool, really emotive and compelling to read.
So to summarise I liked muchly please please write some more :)
So to summarise I liked muchly please please write some more :)
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read your comment about the title in you
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4 is very interesting with the interaction between Eleanor and other people. How she becomes an outsider, how a few times behaving in a manner that is deemed odd is enough to achieve that. That fundamental mismatch with the rest of humanity.
I do think these slight
I do think these slight
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this Dumbledore :) I think it
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6. Good chapter but hard to read. Snape was terrible, basically trying to condemn Eleanor to his own solitude and weirdness. Ginny is very sweet and brave standing up to him, and Eleanor doesn
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Review of Chapter 5:
Trelawney is such a jerk. She may be clairvoyant, but when it comes to perceiving people
Trelawney is such a jerk. She may be clairvoyant, but when it comes to perceiving people
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can understand authors creating similar protagonists to themselves. I noticed that I did that with both Valerie in
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really happy to hear that Eleanor is not Kirsty Flame. It really annoys me how other fanfic writers I might have read, tend to create the same type of OFCs over and over again! I am glad you like to use different personas for characters. What you
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February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just dropping in to tell you, I'm up to being your beta if you'd like. I'll try to be timely about it and get it done fast. I can do the next chapter or two, but I'm not sure about the whole story.
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter. I think it good that Eleanor got Ravenclaw. Hmmm