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Please update chapter 28 soon.

Yay! Snape to the rescue. I hope there's an epic duel so i can fantasize about two really yummy dark men sweating with their shirts off ... hmmm.... haha Okay i'm done with the day dream I PROMISE!! Even though Snape is an asshole we can all admit that he is a very good protector. Gosh, he just needs get over some of that bitterness. Christ! No wonder life is so dark for him. If he keeps hanging onto it, it will never go away ... okay i'm done with my rant now. Poor Ellie, and poor Phoebe ... you know now that i think about it, i wrote Snape in somewhat the same way in my own fanfic ... he's a bitter asshole for 149 pages hee hee hee

But you're right. Snape is too bitter to be anything but an asshole and Lucius is just deliciously bad. I can't wait for you to add another chapter! I am eagerly waiting!

Koolgirl18

Oh Shit! Things are getting intense! All of the secerts are going to come flying out. Snape is going to be pissed when he finds out that she's been watching him shag ... although I'm kind of mad at Snape (and believe me when i say that I love Snape with the white hot intensity of one thousand suns hee hee). I mean, when is he going to learn that you draw more bees when honey than with vinegar? Gods what an asshole! And don't get me started on Lucius (another character I love with the white hot intensity of one thousand suns)! He should have seduced her like a good boy but instead he raped her. He's another asshole!

Okay I'm done ranting now lol

You're still faithfully bookmarked

Koolgirl18 :D

I like how you've brought phoebe into this, be interesting to see how things play out between snape and her. Hmmm is this beginning to discovering more about Ellie? Oh I can't wait to read more ^_^

Great story! I'm really enjoying the development of the characters and the plot line. At the same time, I can't help but be sad. How is she going to tell Snape? And what about Draco? I feel as if I'm going to swoon lol I hope you update soon. I really look forward to knowing what happens next.

You have been bookmarked :D
Koolgirl18

this story is bloody amazing. i cant believe i never read it before today. i am hooked on this wonderful plot and i cant wait to see what happens next with eleanor and severus. ahhh!!!!!!!

Yay! was really glad to see that this story had been updated :D Don't worry I know exactly how you feel, I havent updated mine in ages, such is life hehe great chapter, but Lucius is a bad bad man, I don't think Severus is going to like it much when he finds out where Ellie is staying nor when he finds out what Lucius did... oh dear! Please update soon! ^_^

Hi i've been very busy...I will come back here in a few days to review. I almost forgot. Glad you're back....Maybe you can also try reading, "across the quidditch pitch"? I finished that story. I also finished the dark gryffindor, not sure if you know! I will come and review later....And it'd be nice if you could read mine too again! looking forward to it, but am busy at the mo.

just read 23, the prediction chapter. This story is really getting better, and seems even better than your other story. Your characterizations for all the teachers was brilliant. I really laughed at Trelawney/Snape's conversation. Flitwick is ridiciculous...it's almost like the ravenclaw head thinks he can find the answer to Eleanor being disturbed because of some bad test score...it's not going to be there. I also liked the way you had Trelawney, explain her as a bad aura. I guess she is still inwardly glowing over Lucius's kiss....the party is exciting and I am going to read the next chapter right away next! It sounds ominous and bad, and I wonder how much Lucius will discover and if he will use his son? But since Draco told Snape he really cares for Eleanor and would never hurt her or her cat again, I can't imagine this being too bad! It's also good to see your keeping the trio, ginny and Luna involved with Eleanor.

On a personal note, I also have had a busy life since the past several months and almost forgot about your story. I am looking for a special bf who is also kinky, lol. Not easy to find....Anyway, I have a feeling you had a romance this summer, right? I remember you mentioning there was somebody you liked working at the Cannes film festival with you?! (you told me in an email).

for 23: also i really appreciated your great insights into Lucius's past...I bet he was quite the player at Hogwarts...And I like the idea of Snape standing by, and letting these girls get hurt, especially the muggle-borns who made SNape feel better about not getting Lily. He wanted to watch another muggle-born girl get rejected by a Pureblood prick like Lucius, cause he was always being rejected by his Lily. I could see Snape observing this while a boy and friends with Lucius, because even though Snape might have a good heart, he can be mean and sometimes not care when others are in pain....