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person SParker
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about #4...

O-o-okay, reading this story up to this point, I have come to the conclusion that this
story is less about Harry in general and more about the lives of different wizards &
witches and how they live.

This is the impression I'm getting so far...because of the simple fact there is NO
real focus on anyone.

Is that what this story is about??? With occassional drama mixed in?

All in all, you DO have my attention. I want to see where you go with this.
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5! You've got me worried that something is going to happen at this party!
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 4!! What is this prophesy? Is Harry the returner?
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well thought out story with great depth to the characters. Lovely story. Thanks for writing it.
person poohbear74
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Albus is behind this? Soooo need chapter 3!!!
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm. you have my attention. what next?
person jldaquin
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good so far! This was obviously written by someone of great skill. Keep up, the good work; I'll be looking forward to reading more from you!
person poohbear74
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start!
person alma
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very good start of story!