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for A mix of everything

by LovelyPair

schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
IT IS SOOOOOO GREAT AND AWESOME AND WONDERFUL AND AMAZING AND SPIFFING TO SEE YOU BACK!!!! I love your work, LovelyPair2, and you finally wrote something new! YAY!!!

A mix of everything is just as creative... and HOT... as your other works. I hope you write more and more (even if it is just for me, I dont mind ;) ) and I also have to comment that your writing skills have gotten better (not that I minded in the begining, your stories were too good to let it worry me).

And if you get any bad reviews for your work, send 'em my way so I can knock their block off. I dont want anyone getting you down and stopping you from writing. I hope you update A mix of everything, or the creepy house, or write something new, I dont mind, just PLEASE, PLEASE *PLEASE* keep writing. You will ALWAYS have a fan in me!
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I can do more than smile right now...and shift in my own seat. Once again, you're one of my favorite writers to read^.^ Your stuff has developed in great ways, but I hope you don't lose that simplicity I like to see from you.
oxox
Torie
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was certainly not what I expected to see when I read the summary. ;)

That isn't meant in a bad way, just so you know.
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your Grammar has improved significantly, but you seem to still make typos and forget that every time that there is a new speaker that it's a new paragraph.
person toozdae
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! Your back. I'm so happy you're writting again because you are one of my favorite people here. I love this story until the Ginny part. That was confusing but loved the Snarry. Please write more.
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well this is kinda kinky, but I love my kinky snarry! I hope you update soon!
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! One of my favourite authors is back! (That's you!) Although, I don't know if I've reviewed any of your work. Anyway, I thought it really funny. The way you portrayed Snape was dead on, and I think that if Harry really had that stuff done to him, he would have acted partly like that. Good job. Your writing style has definately improved over your other stories, but they're still as hot as ever, lol. Hopefully, you'll keep writing this story? (I've actually have this plot bunny of a story like this, but it was a threesome instead of just Snape and Harry. If you find yourself writer-blocking, and you don't think I'm stupid for suggesting this, just email me? Mainly I say this because I would like to see you continue this.)
Thanks!
<3 smelly
person kanaro
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy your stories, though I admit I'm not a fan of scat. Not being able to go to the bathroom for 3 days is probably a health hazard - wouldn't it have been easier just to say that the butt plug could remove the waste or something?

Looking forward to some more kinky smut!