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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazingly written and detailed, that I could almost smell the interesting aroma of Venice. Moments of deep emotional distress for Lucius' plight that I almost cried... Brilliant!
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And you stopped there?????
I hope they get to St. Mungos after they are left alone!
But I think that will take some time!
And it seems he's starting to sort of getting under her skin. Or he's trying to make that happen.
So more soon!
I hope they get to St. Mungos after they are left alone!
But I think that will take some time!
And it seems he's starting to sort of getting under her skin. Or he's trying to make that happen.
So more soon!
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Chapter six is quite the cliffie! That's an evil thing to do to us, love. More, please, preferably before Hermione's out of surgery!
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eek! What a cliffie! Will she be ok? I'm guessing physically - yes. It seems like mentally, she might have a tough time. Could it be that her perception of "bad luck" will be changed eventually? Maybe it's wishful thinking... Can't wait for more!
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! They're butting heads like two mad goats! I can't wait for more - I hope she knocks him out for kissing her again!
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such firery tempers the both of them!
And this time he kissed her in full awareness of who she was!
Please more!!
And this time he kissed her in full awareness of who she was!
Please more!!
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, So much have happened!
From meeting the hag to both getting shot.
And now he kissed her?
Please more soon!
From meeting the hag to both getting shot.
And now he kissed her?
Please more soon!
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
!!!! Wow! I was totally surprised by this chapter! I love the bank scene - too funny... such a cliffie though, please update soon!
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am completely loving this fic! I was so excited after reading the first three chapters to see that there was a new update this afternoon. Now, I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.....like I need it...now! :-)
However, I will say that you ended chapter 4 with a very naughty cliffie. Just cruel.
However, I will say that you ended chapter 4 with a very naughty cliffie. Just cruel.
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving this so far. It's very well thought out. I enjoy Lucius taken down a notch and slightly neurotic. Your characterization of Hermione is also spot-on. This is a unique story, well-written and full of tongue-in-cheek humor. Please continue and I hope that others come to their senses and give you more reviews! (you're certainly deserving for this great piece)