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by Mettelille

schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh you evil evil person! You can't count it as an update if you just update the same thing from another person's point of view! *stomps foot*
Oh poor Draco!!! Harry you better be back soon! Also, if for some reason you decide not to let him come back, please let us know somehow (even if you send me a quick email!) so then I can stop reading so that I won't be bawling my eyes out all night and worrying my dog... again...
Hope to see more soon! =D
person sonykit
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am speechless. that was so wonderfully done! full of different emotions - angst, love, sheer helplessness, all intertwined in a picture of draco's commitment to harry. i love the twist of his pregnancy and the feeling of confusion that overcame him - it was, at least to me, piognant in a sense. great job. hope to read more soon. :)
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cries passionately* Yeah! Go Harry! Go kill that snake faced bastard and go back to Draco!
Aww poor boys! Poor Draco especially!
person sonykit
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like how you started out. harry's point of view was a good touch, making each moment more intimate, privy to the desperation and helplessness he feels. i really admire the fact that although this remains to be harry's pov, you do not lose track of draco. he seems so transparent and vulnerable and emotions are really felt. i love how you started this, and i hope to read more soon. i always adore a faithful-draco character who waits for harry despite everything. :)