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September 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved this (:
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a short but sweet story. Excellent work.
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was wonderful! I am soooo going to miss this!
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww! That was really cute! I'm so glad things turned out fine! Thanks for sharing this story with us!
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i read the last two chapters in succession so i'll just put my reviews for each chappie together, yeah?
anyways, chapter 5 was, at least to me, a strategic chapter to place the letters. although each letter was brief, one can really empathize with draco - his love, hopes, desperation, anxiety, etc. you managed to relay so many emotions with so little words.
on the last chapter, it was great that harry came about the same time draco was giving birth. it was like something in harry stirred because of that event. and the epilogue was so promising. great job.
good luck to more of your writings. :)
anyways, chapter 5 was, at least to me, a strategic chapter to place the letters. although each letter was brief, one can really empathize with draco - his love, hopes, desperation, anxiety, etc. you managed to relay so many emotions with so little words.
on the last chapter, it was great that harry came about the same time draco was giving birth. it was like something in harry stirred because of that event. and the epilogue was so promising. great job.
good luck to more of your writings. :)
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December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 6!!! Where are the missing letters? It is because of the war that they got lost or has someone kept them?
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5!!! Each of them sent letters and they were never received. Why? Will Harry wake up?
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
melancholic tones without being too overtly tragic. draco's love and devotion to harry was admirable, especially the way he has conversed with him - angry, sad, hopeful - as if harry was awake. good chapter. wishing for the next one already. :)
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is turning out to be one of the fics i really like. it has depth of character, evolution and pacing of plot, and a melange of emotions that keeps the readers on their toes. i love the melancholic, almost tragic, tone coupled with undying hope and love. i think its really great. hope to read more soon. :)
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very short and very brief chapter but hey! It's a chapter! =)
And when it ends as it did, I can't complain!
Hope to see more soon!
And when it ends as it did, I can't complain!
Hope to see more soon!