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Faith Hill - This Kiss 3:16

Well, I hate just gushing like a wordless twit but honestly... you're story is so good that I can't quite say what I mean. Just know that I think you're doing a lovely job and I am in love with your story.

No no no! Don't take him to bed Draco. Take him to Hermione!

Love this fic. Love it, love it, love it.

At least he hasn't shown symptoms of rage (yet!). We need Hermione to put on her WonderWoman cape and boots and save the day.

I stand up and give you a bow. Not only did you keep Hermione and Snape from being OOC you did a great job with the detail. Which nothing gets under my skin like a very OOC Hermione or Snape. I'm also a big believer in detail so you earned extra brownie points for that too. Nothing better then being able to see the scene in your mind as you read. Your plot moves like a well oiled car. No bumps or pitfalls that would confuse someone and have them back track trying to figure out where they fell off the happy fanfiction train. Such a fantastic way to let them meet again and bravo on coming up with a reasonable way of having Snape alive in your story. Keeping writing you've definitly have skill with capturing the readers interest with your creative writing.

Ok, first off, I love this story. Very entertaining! I am particularly fond of your Draco. always hated that brat but a well done Draco is a pleasure indeed. Keep writing, love it so far. Secondly...SHORT?! Have you lost your mind?! No. he. is. not! Tall! That man is Tall! Short me arse, Tall, I say! >sticks fingers in her ears< I can't HEAR you!! LA LA LA! Too busy looking at TALL SNAPE in my head! ~ahem~ now continue...

"Ghost Busters". Bill Murray's line when Egon is giving a synopsis of their situation with Zool and the gatekeepers. I watch too much late night TV. I absolutely loved it when Severus pelted Draco with the dragon dung! Nearly spit coffee on my keyboard! Think I'd have learned by now not to drink while reading (grumble). the fantasy sequences were quite good, also. Waiting for more!

Wow. Another very well written chapter. This is like the best fic that nobody seems to be reading which is a huge pity.

I liked the desciption of the floo signal/traffic jam. I don't think I've seen anything like it before. Very original.

As always, I look forward to new material!

AV

I still haven't quite worked out all the reasons why Snape doesn't want to have anything to do with her, but I look forward to finding out. So the rash clears up quickly? Pity. And who stole the champignons? Plot thickens. Excellent work m'dear.

I like it. Please update soon.

*ignoring the fact that Severus is short....lol*

I love this story already and I really hope you can update soon. It's very well written. Thanks!