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for Becoming Silhouettes

by RhiannonoftheMoon

person MewMew2
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why did you have to put that note about Labyrinth at the end? Now the words 'Dance Magic Dance' are playing in my head over and over again. Ugh, that song...... Thank you for updating your wonderful story. Please do so again when u have the chance
person MewMew2
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing. This story has caught my interest, please update once more when you have the job. Excellent job in portraying Snape!
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapters one through four

Marvelous story, very exciting storyline what with the mysteriously EVIL mushroom plague and such.

I enjoy your descriptions of the characters looks, personalities, and thought processes--very well done.

I also enjoy the character interactions/byplay, including double entendres and frustrations, and the conflicts because of those encounters.

EEK! Poor Severus to have contracted the dreaded Rash due to Draco's stupidity in his less than stellar reveallation of the details regarding the sample of mushroom. UGH!

VERY well done--keep up the good work!
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapters five through seven

Huh? What does the following quote mean by "finished by Azkatraz"?
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schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I stumbled across this story, and it has taken me a couple of days to read all of you chapters, and now I am so sad to have to wait to read more. I do hope that you will not make me wait very long for an update. This story seems to be so very well thougt out. One of the best I have ever read on fan fiction! So many very original concepts you have in this story. Great job. Please don't make me wait too long to read more!
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*points finger at authoress* You!! Are!!! Wonderful!!! *tackle roll glomp* I am reading your Labryinth story, and thanks to the new format, when I clicked in the HP section, I saw your name. So, imediately I read, and I am immensely glad I did. This is bloody fantastic. I am sorry, but you won't get a very coherent or eloquent review from me this time. I read the thing in one go, and my mind is absolutely racing with everything I have read. I have to say, that my favorite part, was when Severus was all loopy from the cure. He was absolutely adorable, and I loved seeing the softer, more armorous side of him. As always, this is wonderfully detailed, fantastically written, the characters are all perfect. Oh,loved Serverus's snipe at Draco about Hermione's reasoning behind starting her Clinic. I also love that she is a wizarding equivelant of a plastic surgeon. It's brilliant. The whole story is, it's got me on the edge of my seat here. I was devastated to read the last chapter. I am chomping at the bit for more. Oh, and I loved the Sweeney Todd reference. I adore that movie, so when I read, the "Benjamin Barker's ward for the criminally insane" I giggled and cheered. LOL. Love this, love you, and as I should have done when I began reading, "Play the Game", I am going to check and see what else you've written, and hopefully it will tide me over until there are more updates. ^.^ XXOO
person VoraciousReader
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think you have given the best psychologically plausible reason for Snape to become interested in Hermione that I have ever read. Yes, the man has spent his entire life at Hogwarts, and was never really socialized in any other environment. And the image of a stoned Snape was wonderful!
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the originality of the story you're writing and I like you're version of Hermione, Snape and the rest. I look forward to Hermione being the solution to the wizarding illness, but I look forward even more to him staying "nice" to her. lol Loving it! Thank you.
person Sandra
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome. I love it so far, please update soon
person VoraciousReader
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, very reminiscent of what I've read of London in the plague outbreak in the 1660's and of the typhoid outbreaks in the 1900's. So, when do we find out what happened to Ginny?