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for Becoming Silhouettes

by RhiannonoftheMoon

person Shellnet
schedule May 5, 2019 at 12:00 AM

This was good to bad it was Abandoned 

schedule February 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please, please update this story again! I really want to know how it ends. Please email me f you ever decide to write again. Please keep writing and update soon!
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please, will there be more?! So many questions to be answered...
And, as always, I want Severus to win Hermione and everyone's nose to be rubbed in it! LOL
person Ariathel
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! Your story is amazing!
-Pixie
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am following this story on Ashwinder, but wanted to drop a note here, too. More people should be reading/reviewing this excellent story!
person vonHardenberg
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A most excellent tale, well written. I wish you the time to continue to finish. One of the best reads I have in four years of fan-fiction reading. Brava, bravissima!!!

With much respect.
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I tried to add a review but I guess it didn't take. I love this story and really hope you are going to write more on it. If you are please let me know (I hate that you cannot track updates on here!) -Clare
person jaynetrazom
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MORE NOW PLEASE
this is very good, some of the best hg/ss ive read in a long time. please write more and fast
xoxo
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter nine

Holy cow! Rash victim thrall zombies on the attack--bummer, but exciting.
:D

Poor Severus to have lost all of his hard work with the plants that are needed in his brewing of potions, and other things too.
:(

I love Hermione flirting with Severus. Too bad he has such a low self-esteem as to not be confident enough in his abilities to snag the girl for himself. Hopefully Hermione will go out of her way to worm her way into his life by being a continual presence and tempting him by her actions, mannerisms, nonverbal communication, comments, and state of dress.

Well done--keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to additional chapters.
:D