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January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love how the story is subversive to (indirectly, challenges) social convention.
I also think the ending is great: "why fix what's not broken?" nicely wraps the story satisfactorily while leaving it somewhat ambiguous at the same time poetically.
I also think the ending is great: "why fix what's not broken?" nicely wraps the story satisfactorily while leaving it somewhat ambiguous at the same time poetically.
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this one, too. I love all your Ron/Pansy stories, especially the long ones. :)
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The thing with the strawberries? That would far away and totally get it for me.
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story was a little shocking to me. I could not believe that Ron would do that to Pansy. I mean it was really nice of him to buy her a house and all. I keep on wishing that my lover would be like him. It is hard being the other woman. So many times we want to be number one, but there is a shortage in men it is hard to find a good one. I enjoyed this story very much. I will look at the rest that you have posted so far.
Liz
Liz
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoy all your pansy/ron stories this one included. Continue the good work and the multiple updates!
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another beautiful chapter. Well Done
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update. Intresting yet simple. You clearly love clifhanger endings, as I do too. The last chapter with the interview was really good, and I loved the little titbits that concerned Pansy's feelings. Well Done, keep ups the good work.
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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update, it was fantastic. Sara really is a b**ch. I like the way you made Ron sympahetic, that moment when he wouldn't visit Pansy cause he was angry, that was really good. If you want to, can you involve Harry and Hermione more into the story. I really want to see them supporting and defending their friend. Anyway great update and update soon. Thanks
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What an extensive update. Very intriguing so far, I like the way you laid out the need of comfort that both Ron and Pansy had to get involved, man I really am becoming a Ron/Pansy shipper. Also in regarding Ron's wife, for a moment I thought Hermione was his wife, but I'm glad you made her a friend and an adviser. Anyway Sara sounds like a complete b**ch. Please update soon. Take Care
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hate Ron in most stories! But i adoreeee yours!
keep up the good work1
keep up the good work1