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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

person amsev
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just stopped by again to let you know I very much enjoyed "Plan B" -- just in case you are no longer reading the reviews from that story. Write more more more! Love your style.
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the beginning. Your Hermoine is strong and articulate. You made me join just to review. Keep up the great work. I want to see more.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm freakishly excited to read this story. I wish to high heaven I had time to offer to be a beta, but there's no way in the world. That said, I hope you have a fabulous time writing, and I look forward to reading every word.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see where this one goes. Very interesting.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wait. You sent Severus to Azkaban? AAGH! I demand a conjugal visit! No fair; now I have to wait and see what happens. Pout.
person Angie30
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start, you have certainly got my attention. I'm liking this story becuase it's Hermione doing the scheaming and not Dumbledore. Well done, I look forward to seeing how this develops.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This sounds great! I can't wait to read more.
person crssmnc
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the different take on the marriage law. I can't wait to read more. How often do you anticipate updating? crssmnc@gmail.com
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant first chapter, I really loved your Hermione, she was like a breath of fresh air compared to all the "damzel in distress" who lets everyone walk all over her "Hermiones" who seems to be so in fashion to portrait her as at the moment. Like the smart girl who solved most of the tasks several rather intelligent Professors set in her first year, stod by Harry when most others (Ron included at times) turned his back on him, served Umbrigde on a platter to the Centaurs, found a way to keep her parents safe during the war, gave Draco a rigth hook he probably never forgot, would let anyone walk all over her without making them pay the prize. Not to mention, I hardly find it likely that a man like Severus would be attracted to a Hermione who stutters and sniffles and lump her shoulders. Nope, "his" hated know-it-all Gryffindor who annoys the hell out of him would get much more of his attention:-))
Yup, really loved this and I am so looking forward to read more!!!