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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person neelix
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is brilliant!!! I love Hermione when she has balls... and when she locks horns with Severus, building up plenty of , erm...tension!

Cant wait for the next update....!
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*blush* I'm frankly amazed that anybody here remembers me. I've been gone for a while, and that isn't likely to turn around soon. But I still read some. Anyway, I perfectly love your Hermione, and your Snape. They are very real. And you're just a fantastic writer. I can't tell you how many great plot lines have been ruined by abysmal grammar--and I will not read such things. I'm loving it so far.

And thanks to the dear reader who sped things along. As lj is down today, I needed some form of procrastination. :o)
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it love it LOVE IT! I love how you are keeping them in character, it's so well written! I feel like I'm settling back reading a good novel. I hope you get to update soon!
person CB13
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I really enjoyed your opening shots, er, I mean, A/N. Not being catty - good for you for taking a slower, realistic approach. The FF canon, if you will, seems to always over-sympathize their prior relationship.

Ok, gotta get reading. I haven't even begun your story yet!

Cheers

CB
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the premise and her thoughts on the topic. I love a good, strong, smart Hermione. And, I like that you aren't going to have them get right to it. While non-canon fluff is fun to read and I do enjoy it, canon-Hermione and canon-Snape are not two people who would pine for each other normally. lol Can't wait for more. Thanks! HG4eva
person Citten
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i cant wait to see where you go with this! :) i have no problem with the fact on your views on the non-religious bases in this fic. i am really looking forward to a nice long stroy! i am assumeing though that they will eventually...tolerate or dare i hope love each other? :) well i guess i will just have to read to find out. i do hope that you will be posting reguarly and i do hope that even if you do find a beta that you will continue to post! i will be watching for more (and i do hope lots more)!
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I saw the blurb for this and knew I just had to stop by and read a bit but alas! Only a chapter? No more? Couldn't we have just a couple to go on? I'm already hooked and I honestly can't wait for the next update. You've done a good job thus far.
person amsev
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the first chapter very much and look forward to reading more!
person ismene5
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be an interesting story.
Please update soon!