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LOL! You sure had Ronniekins treading on thin ice there. Poor Snape -- sentenced to no SEX???? Gonna have to have that sentence commuted to at least sex in da hoosegow...

A.V. - Hello! Lovely story - you handled the Weasley business well. I particularly like how you made Ron clearly not a good fit for Hermione without making him a complete jackass in the process. I also appreciate your clarity - you are able to write succinctly, which is rarer than you might think, and valued in every genre.

Keep up the good work. Thanks so much for writing.

Cheers

CB

Bloody brilliant!!
Will the ministry try to block the marriage??
Will they rescind the no sexual intercourse to make their marriage bind?
Or will new evidence be retrieved thus rendering Snape innocent and free??
So many questions!!!

Well done tho darlin!

Hmmm... I am not sooo much into the Hermione/Snape pairing (as my alias indicates ;-)) but this seems to be quite interesting! I like your story very much thus far and I hope you will update soon! I wished I could go read on, I am so curious how their "relationship" will develop. They are in for a rocky ride, I think - aren't they?

This story has planted it self on the very top of my favourite WIP's list, I think I am falling in love:-))) As I have said previously; your Hermione and Severus really rocks, I totally adore them and you have my complete admiration for your writing and plot. You did a marvellous portrait of Ron too, he will never be my favourite person, and the thougth of him paired with Hermione makes my stommach turn, you manage to portrait him as totally unsuitable for Hermione without making him a total prat. Still his mothers son, but also smart enough to be releived that Hermione turned down his proposal:-))
Yup, it sure makes my day brigther to find an update! I am so looking forward to see what terms Severus will demand to the contract, I am sure that no matter how favourable Hermione have made the deal, he will make some terms just because he is Severus and wants to have his way somehow:-))

wah! I foresee lots of obsessive checking to see if a new chapter has been added

I like the new concept of having Hermione be the one in charge instead of Dumbledore, but how she obviously isn't completely in charge and won't have complete control once married to Snape since he's already exerting control and all that. The bits of wry humor are also tossed in perfectly and fluidly.

Love the writing!

--wintaer

Love the new chapter. A little more insight on the Hermione we know and love :D.

Of course it's a wonderful story and the reason for that compliment is your style of writing and a wonderful plot.

One of the most creative in the Marriage Laws. Most people pardon Snape but for once I find it amusing he's in prison. Keep up the good work love :D

Always
Falle

nice story, i like where its going :)

update soon!

Ch.3: "The devil you know...?" to qoute Bugs Bunny: "She don't know me very well, do she?!" LOL! More is eagerly requested!

I'm waiting patiently for Hermione's plan to erupt in her face. Well done!