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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see how this comes along... I never understood JKR putting Ron and Hermione together - SS/HG should have been canon! Am awaiting to find out all of Snapes demands as well!
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great update! I just loooove this:-)) There are several reasons for my love; it is a new way to write the MLC, your writing is excellent, but most importantly; your characters are equals, both of them are snarky and out for exploiting the advantages the other one can bring them. I am so tired of the "Severus is abusive and hurt Hermione, who sniffles some tears, lump her shoulders and come crawling back for more abuse, because Severus have issues and thus are allowed to be abusive and she is just a dumb child who needs someone to tell her how stupid she is who thinks she knows anything at all. But if she begs for forgiveness and declare her undying love among with promises to never think that he can be wrong, he migth forgive her and even show some affection..." Gagh, nope, serve me a snarky Severus any day (Severus is snarky:-)) but please give me the Hermione who saved Harry and Ron's arses time after time, who served Umbrigde to the Centaurs and who obliviated her own parents to save them; That is not a damzel in distress!!!
Not to mention, your story entertains me, it makes me laugh, and it makes me feel good when reading it, and that is the most important thing since I read fanfic for the entertainment:-))) I look forward to read more!!!!
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know who the man.. that is severus' lawyer, but this is a really great story. I haven't really read much on here, but it's good none the less. I love the jabs they throw at each other...
How will you find a way around the whole 'multiple life sentences'? that is going to be interesting... anyways, good work. :D
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh!!! So he's incarcerated because he's witholding evidence that could clear himself!??
I'm dying for the next chapter!!!!
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. We all know Sevie is a greedy git some times. I have a feeling it's not gonna be all sugar quills and plush chairs for him :P

I'm quite Slytherin myself in the reality sense. I would do the exact same in his situation.

Hope Hermione has fun cutting out some of the clauses haha.

With love,
Falle
person amsev
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah, now I have the Perry Mason theme music stuck in my head: all bodacious brasses. Jeez, they sure knew how to write TV soundtracks in the 60s, all jazzy and sexy.

Hoosegow is just slang for jail. ROFLMAO: And his only true lustful fantasies he
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, sometimes I need a little change. And then, I can always enjoy a nicely written story. And this one is nicely written, so...

Hah, pet snake owners only? I knew the hamster was a good choice! :-D

Yes! He would just NOT fall in love with his pupil! I always pictured him as a proud man - not a leech lusting after little girls. There are so many storys that promote it... Uhh...

So I get that right? He's got evidence that could free him? Why the hell is he in prison then? Euhmm... I am not quite sure I understand this man! But it will for sure be interesting for the two of them once he gets out! Especially with that contract... Ah, I think Hermione might not quite know what she's in for!

Really nice update, already waiting for the next chapter!
person wintaer
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
self-imposed imprisonment... why oh why? Guilt?

wrangling cats... haha! *sing song voice* Hermione's gonna have a bugbear!
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I can't wait to see what the list of demands is. Please update soon.
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting :) im excited to see what Snape wrote as his demands :P

no idea on the A.Ffoulkes :S