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I'm really enjoying this story. Snape is being very characteristically mean to Hermione about the contract. I only wish that the story would move faster - I know that Snape is up to something with this - is he going to get out of azkaban and make Hermione have his children? & why would he want that? - I'm very intrigued and I suppose the reason why I want it to move faster is really just because I really like it and want to see what happens!

Hi there. I don't think I've commented on your story yet, and for that I am sorry. I am really enjoying it. I love your snarky, manipulative Severus, and I can't wait for him to finally allow himself to be set free. Hermione is going to have a cow! First, from what I can tell, she hates being manipulated, almost as much as being wrong. And, the fact that she won't be able to get out of it is going to send her through the roof. I am giggling just thinking about it. But, I also look forward to seeing them falling in lust and then love with one another and fighting it every step of the way. Should provide me with plenty of laughter along the way. I also must tell you that I like your writing. It's very well done. Thank you for sharing this story with us. I can't wait for your next update! HG4eva

I'm really enjoying this, I'm glad that they are on a more equal footing - whenever the balance tips too far from one to the other, I start to worry! I like that you do not make them particularly attracted to each other; this is very realistic, given the book. Great work!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

*snort* this is hilarious! I can just see it coming: Hermione has to cater to his every whim, make his ancestral home livable and when she finally thinks it's getting better, he will get out of Azkaban with a big scandal.

Cohabitation, fidelity clause and children, huh? Hermione is in way over her head!

I can't wait!

can't wait for more. Really enjoying this one.

I like it. Please update soon.

HAHAHAHA I JUST LOVE THIS STORY, IM SHOCKED HE DOSENT WANT HER TO HAVE HIS BABY??? THATS LETTING HER OFF EASY LOL........UPDATE SOON!!!

Wow, the Scarlet Pimpernel I haven't read that since what...elementary school, middle school. A long time anyway, long enough to actually forget it existed. Hermione the super cold hearted bitch is rather amusing. I do so hope you write Snape getting out at some point and making her reap the benefits of her choices. I'm very glad I decided to give this a try, it was worth it.

still wonderful. This is a fun read. Thank you. I can't wait for the next installment of negotiations. I wonder what he will next demand. He got her to move into his house, reading material, twice weekly visits, cell clean up and there are what, 29 more demands? This is going to be fun. I wonder at what point Hermoine will chuck it decide to just strangle the obstinate man.