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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

person rini868
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your fic. It's really good :)

I had a look at your chapter titles. You wouldn
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been so very bad to you. I haven't reviewed once! I'm so sorry, I just kept getting lazy. Anyway, this story is soooooo good. I love it. Please continue!

person marcia
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The uptight sanctimonious Hermione you write is both annoying and funny to 'watch'. Though JKR did write her that way to a lesser degree. I really want to read where her plans really go bad and he gets out on appeal. Preferably BEFORE they're on good terms ;)
person anncee
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm so intrigued as to where this story is going although i can't wait til we get to the point in the story where, i forget which chapter but where severus' lawyer person comes in saying ready to present those papers to get out of this hell hole? (or something to that extent), where that whole bit is explained......although i imagine it has to do with what he will use to get out of prison later on where he and hermione can be together after.....? or something along the lines....i hope =] hehe love the story! keep writing!
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good stuff
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
~Hello:) What a marvellous story-line. I am indeed waiting for Hermione to realise that Snape's just played her entirely to his own advantage, and for the other shoe to drop as it were. Please update soon ;)
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No feeding the snakes, my Hamsters all died of old age... And the last one about 17 years ago. So I don't think I am at risk of emprisonement!

Witch Weekly? I only read magazines like that when taking the train - but being a witch she doesn't need to waste her time in lengthy train rides... I think she would consider reading that kind of magazine vain and pointless, don't you agree?

A year grieving time? LOL... They REALLY don't like each other! I wonder what that will give when Snape gets out of prison!

Steadfast and abiding love? Who is he trying to kid? The last part is probably more honest!

Oh I definitely see Snape enjoy riling her up! Oh my, the two of them will have a - well let's say - turbulent relationship. Hehe, obviously we all wait for Snape to get out! She's asking for it! Although I guess that Snape is right with his observation that she's barely a little, scared girl!

Great update (like all the others since I reviewed for the last time)!
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, another brilliant update! While I don't exactly want for everything to blow up in Hermiones face, I am usually rather "protective" of her, a small part of me do think that when she aint smart enough to realise that Severus is not as guilty as she thinks him to be, he deserves to annoy her a little.... (I am here of course using the assumption that Severus aint guilty in the crimes they have put him in Azkaban for).
I do enjoy it because this Hermione is strong enough to take it. I would be very surprised if she lumps her shoulders and sniffles some tears when things aint going her way. I like this "give as good as she gets kind of girl" and while Severus probably have more than one secret up his sleeve, he wont be able to break her. Not to mention, I highly doubt that Severus would want someone with less spirit and attitude than his new wife. He doesn't strike me as someone who is looking for submisive, weak, stuttering and tame in a partner, he highly enjoy this game he is playing and is probably having more fun than he ever had. At the same time I hope and whish for him to be smart enough to know that Hermione Granger is perfect as his wife just as she is, attitude and all:-))
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Boy, Hermione really does dislike Severus, doesnt she? LOL. If she thought he was disgusting but kissed heavenly...then there is some hope here. LOL. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading the next chapters.

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