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Oh dear me

Hello Appolonia,

oh, I was so happy to see you've updated. Since I recived surgery twice last week it was a real treat after awefull days. Thank you very much.
I specially liked the last chapter. It just shows how much Severus really sufferes in jail. The way he stares at the boxes, not knowing what to do - very well written. The description of Moine's workday was a bit too long or maybe I was just to curious for more Sev. Who knows?
Anyways, I'm definetly looking forward to the next chappies and meeting of the newly wedds. Wonder how they will get along.
Please update soon and till then
LOL,
Alex

Well, Hermione is once again making a man out of Severus in a more subtle way. Slowly she is bringing back the self-respecting man he once was in his own right. A single gift box at a time is going quite a long way to him returning back to our Snape. Although new garments and towels are not bringing him back alone, Hermione's visits will do the majority...i think.

Red

I can almost feel Severus relaxing in his leather chair, flicking through a book as if he were in his own quarters at Hogwarts! Hermione seems to know her professor more than she might care to admit, I think!

I am truly loving this - will keep an eye open for those updates too!

No, you're so right, that just wouldn't do! Nobody's like that.

So all he needs now is a new matress... Okay, and get out of that hole, but I think that he will eventually, right?

Must be bizarre to have nice things again after such a long time. Though I really wonder why he's still in there if he has enough proove to get out? There must be a reason for that? I am really curious to know it!

I like your story sooo much! As you know I am more a DM/HG or LM/HG reader (and I write nothing else), but as long as it's a good tale told and written in a nice way, I am always open to other things, too... Love yours...

Nice chapter. He is going to have consider his own humanity at some time or another, despite his internal desire to see himself as deserving of punishment. Cutting himself off from the amenities of civilization obviously was one means to this, but a basic human need is for physical comfort, in spite of any emotional response to circumstances. Sooner or later he will emerge from himself (aka: get his head out of his ass)and then Hermione is going to have a full-fledged husband on her hands! I absolutely love the way you are doing the characters; it's totally believable to me, as I've said before. More, please.

OH MAN SHE WORKING ON HIM HAHAHAHA I CANT WAIT FOR HER TO MOVE IN HIS HOUSE WHHOOOOO WEEE....KEEP ON BRING IT!!!!!!

Lovely chapter, darlin. :)

Another great chapter, the only thing I noticed is that the expression is "chalked it up," like writing on a blackboard. But, I'm enjoying this story so far.

omg. I have been on holiday and have only just been able to catch up on your story, so it's been a real treat to devour 5 chapters in one sitting!

Laughed at Severus' list of demands... *snort*

Grinned at the 'baby' talk.... hehehe

and cried a little at the cell scene, Severus's softly spoken 'Hermione' and his breath in her ear, and her trying to make the place at least a little habitable, moved me beyond words.

Nicely done - now... a little more perhaps, dinner parties allowing??