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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
even just by reading the author's note i can tell this is going to be good. loving the premise and, as i've JUST gotten into HG/SS, look forward to reading my first story that's not PWP and my first marriage law as well =]
adding to my bookmarks and will try my best to review, although usually i end up being to engrossed to remember, so apologies in advance. but be assured that i'm already a fan after the 1st chap! xD
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not sure if Ive reviewed or not, Im pretty bad about it. I really like this and am looking forward to seeing where you go with it =).


Happy Writing!
S_G
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! I like the irony that he is the one who recognizes her personal isolation as well as, subconsciously, her need of him. Will that drive him to engineer his release to protect his wife from herself? He has an immense need to be needed, after all.
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi again. Sorry I don't have a lot of time, but I had to say this chapter made me think how funny it is how two people with no desire to know one another are being forced to get to know one another. And, they don't even realize it's happening. Great work! HG4eva
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was very well written. I feel so badly for him. He is so lost and disconnected. It's refreshing to read a story where Hermione is the strong one and Severus the weaker one. I know she's not as together as she appears to him, but she has a backbone, inner strength, her own money, etc. Well done. :-) And, as for my review, yeah! Glad to know I wasn't completely off. lol And, you can't ruin this story for me. It's too good. :-)

Thanks and looking forward to Wednesday, HG4eva
person LilCas
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is realy good please keep writing!
person cyprus
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am really enjoying this story. i did not think i would, but it is very good and your take on the story is worth. i am looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor Snape. That's actually really sad. More soon please! ~M
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I promise a better review later, but now I'm fixing to run to my grandparents' house with my tail between my legs to complete my psychology paper. AWESOMEFREAKINAWESOME chapter--I love it when the Grinch's heart grows three sizes (though I'm not sure that's what's happening here, I'm thinking more a discovery of this thing called... gratitude? emotion? Ah, well, it's bound to be interesting)--and I'm starting to wonder why 3 updates a week sounded so great. :o)

And you are correct, overqualified.

-TQW (that's my rapper name or something)
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok. I loved this chapter it was like the chapter in 'What Katie Did in School' (hope you've read it) called Christmas boxes where the Girls at boarding school get boxes within boxes of goodies from home, and it makes them realise that they're not as alone as they thought they were. Its precious!!!
With Sev remember the finer things of life now and yern for his freedom??
P.S. I'd love a bottle of that 'Good hair day' please forward as you see fit! :P