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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

person Olwen
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations, your being added to my personal list of worthwhile fic writers. I love the dynamic you've set up for Snape and Granger. I feel if you had the time to devote to writing a novel that Snape's warming to her would go even slower. I think you caught him best in the moment of being unable to accept the first packages. No mater how egotistical he seems you can always tell that Severous doesn't feel that he is worthy of being cared for.
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!This fanfic is the first one i've read in along time that isn't one of Miss Fig's(she's my girl)I love how your makeing Hermione and Severus.I can't wait till the net update.
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Every time! Every time I get so excited for your new chapters and I'm so sad when they're over. I really am hopelessly addicted to what you do. Never stop!
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, sleep that sounds delightful. Sleeping with Severus ( hey a gal can dream) heavenly. :) lovely chapter ma'am.
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person rini868
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Camera phones = zero privacy

Poor Hermione. I think Lee should have been more understanding... although she did use glamours to cover her tiredness so people might not have known.


Maybe she could get Severus to help her with stuff or finding another person to hire for her charms team?
person neelix
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that your latin is improving and excpect the chapter titles will become more elongated and harder to pronounce as the story progresses!

In answer to your question - I think Severus needs much more than a hug to solve his problems, but it's always a good start!!!

Loved this update and Hermione being able to talk to him. Bless him, he's a bit of a soft touch, even if he does keep it well hidden!
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter! I wonder how she will react to waking up there? Probably worried about work, I imagine.
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! :(

Poor Snape, what an ordeal with the mirror. So is he going to volunteer to look at her research, or is she going to be the one to ask him?

More soon please!
~M
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Apollina! So good to see you back in the swing. Missed ya! Keep writing. Pitt