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Ha! Hitched (again) and getting it on! Now that's the Severus and Hermionie I know and love! I'm going to be so sad when this story is finished, but it's often that way for me when I'm reading a tale I really love. It's been a great ride and one I'm sure I'll take again from time to time. Your style is so easy to read, but not dumbed down in any way. Very good! I've read several of the one shots you published a little bit ago and it's wonderful to know your style is consistent. Excellent job, once again. and I look forward to reading the rest of this story and whatever else you write. Good Fortune be with you!

It's true, I did suffer from withdraw, but it was everything I wanted it to be.

This was a wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading the final chapter and the epilogue.

I just want to say, I liked the lemons. I mean, I REALLY liked the lemons. Thank you for the lemons, I wouldn't be without them.

But...

You see, you've really spoiled me. I was (as I've already said) really enjoying the lemons, then I got to the end and thought 'Could do with a bit more story in there.' Don't get me wrong, the lemons are good, but I love the way you write the meat of the story, too :)

Anyway, they finally got together, they finally admitted their feelings aloud (and in front of a witness!) and I loved the way Severus immediately thought of the advantage of beating her to it rather than angsting over it making him seem weak. Did I mention the great lemons?

Only one more chapter and an epilogue? *sniffles*

As for your personal life, I hope whatever it was has resolved itself and all is well. I have to say I was concerned for you, I knew it was unlike you to keep us waiting for so long.

On the other hand though, by the time this chapter finally came, *cough*, I was like a parched person dying of thirst, and savoured every word as if it was my last drop. THANK YOU!!!!! It was beautifully crafted and very, very real. *breaks out the pom poms* Go You!

Well, it's about time! I finished reading this chapter well past 1AM this morning and since I had to up at 6AM, I thought it better to review after caffeine.

It was so worth the wait, AV. One of the finest chapters yet, along with the angsty ones of redemption, religion and the DE half-baked orgies. You are a fabulous writer and I will be so sad to see this story end. *sniff, sniff, crying tears of joy and sadness*

But I know your muse will continue to inspire you to write great fanfiction.

*sigh* They're together :)

I hope everything is alright.

I can't wait for the next chapter, but really, take your time.

Boiling hot lemonade!!!!!

First and foremost I hope real life wasn't treating you too horribly. There are many days when I wish I could read and write fanfiction for a living rather than face my day-to-day life. I am glad you are coming out of whatever it was. And, thank you for that perfect and delicious update. I needed a story with happiness and you delivered in spades. Thank you and a cyberhug to you for your real life. HG4eva