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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story, very well written.

I wanted to know if you still needed a beta. let me know. ^_^

schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least he tries! Though I understand that it's not really helpful!

So, Severus made notes in her files? Hmm, I think somebody may realise that it could be of advantage to have a second opinion... She's a real bitch, isn't she? Overworked to no ends, I get that, but still. And what does cause her depression? Work is certainly not the reason, more likely her immersion into it is a result of the depression. Okay, and maybe part of her perfectionist personality. But there has to be another reason, I am intrigued...
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha, what do you mean by tided up in the closet? Tide to my bed is the correct picture I have in my head. :-)))
It was a lovely scene, Moine in Sev's bed. I guess while she dreamed, he did her work some good. Can't wait what happens when she finds out.
Once again - lovely cappy. Looking forward to the next ones.
LOL, Alex
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
She needs to chill out, seriously. But it was another brilliant chapter
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have again and again passed this story by as an uninteresting read. I am so thoroughly disappointing in myself for it as well. One of the most intriguing plot lines I've come across yet, thank you.
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please udpate soon.
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They are getting all cuddly! I love that...

It's incredible how a crying woman can affect men! They either run away as fast as they can, or they get all protective and try to make everything all right! Of course Snape would start to feel protective of his little wife. (Not that he could run away anyways!)

Keep your updates coming, I am soooo hooked!
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
She's going to have to go through withdrawal when he gets out, isn't she? Ouch. Hopefully he'll have some suggestions to ease the load she's carrying, and I love the idea of his Imperial Snarkiness giving her his bed for the night.
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Sweety,
thanks for the good wishes.
My, my, do I see a tender thread between the two? How lovely Severus can be (matching to the title). It was a nice balance between Hermoine's working life and Severus/Moine's day. Very nice!
Oh, sometimes I wish I had a husband in Askaban. Just joking. I am looking forward to the next chappy, could you make it longer???? Pleaaaaaaaaassssseeee!
Till then,
LOL Alex
person CB13
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AV, my dear, I continue to enjoy your delicious Snapey story, but I must confess that the best bit in Chapter 12 was the Latin gift you gave us all for Christmas: I have a catepult. Give me all your money or I will throw rocks at your head.

You're clearly a genius with my kind of humor. I can't wait to see how you unravel Our Heroine. Keep up the great work!!!

Cheers

CB