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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, he had to have something to do--she was in his bed, out cold. Her paranoia is probably every bit as great as his, and she doesn't have the luxury of gaurds surrounding her to make her feel safe. I think that is also a reason he stays in prison, but a smaller one, really. No one can get to him there. But now she's given him another thing to think about, and he's given her a bit of unwanted help. Nice chapter, and I can hardly wait for more.
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I check almost daily to see if you've updated. But don't let that rush you!!!
person Angie30
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say that I am really enjoying your story. Hermione is definetly one fridged uptight bitch for sure lol. she should get off her damn high horse and calm down long enough to read his notes she might find it interesting to read his ideas about her company. Then again maybe she won't who knows. I can't wait to read the next chapter
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! lol seriously, i love this story! i really like how you have kept the chars true to themselves, specially severus, and i cant wait for the next chapter... or 10 lmao
person LilCas
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HE HE Nice!
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please udpate soon.
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed the chapter.
person MomoDesu
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And the mood swings are explained. Gotta love anti-depressants!
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm lovin it! I'm just a bit frustrated that you don't update more often and with longer chapters....I can't wait to read more!
person neelix
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think it's Hermione who needs an extended stay chez Dementor Palace! She is seriously losing the plot..... sheesh!! And Severus! marking her papars like he's still at Hogwarts.

I think I love him a little bit! lol....

Great update as usual honey... can't wait for more :)