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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Blimey. I think Hermione is about to implode! At what point will she accept she can't do it all???
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story. I like the way you don't ramble. One idea or plot twist per chapter, makes me look forward to the next installment. Love some more verbal banter between Snape and Hermonie.
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story.
Please go on soon.
Please go on soon.
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You update much quicker than I do. Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for that. I absolutely love reading your story! Snape is a delightful character in this one.
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is great so far!
I don't remember Hermione being quite so over the top, but with all the drugs she's taking who wouldn't be? :-) I hope Snape's notes are perfect she realizes she could use his help, which would also give him something to do and give them more to talk about. It was great when he kissed her at the wedding, stood behind her in the cell, let her cry in his lap, put her to bed, showed his softer side... I can't wait till the next chapter!
I don't remember Hermione being quite so over the top, but with all the drugs she's taking who wouldn't be? :-) I hope Snape's notes are perfect she realizes she could use his help, which would also give him something to do and give them more to talk about. It was great when he kissed her at the wedding, stood behind her in the cell, let her cry in his lap, put her to bed, showed his softer side... I can't wait till the next chapter!
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, our Heroine is certainly wrapped up tightly. You do make a good point, though, about Hogwarts' lack of advanced maths. It got me thinking about the (probable) resultant monopoly on most aspects of finance and money & banking by Gringotts.
Very interesting. Good writing should always get the audience thinking.
Good work, sister.
Cheers
CB
And PS, I used that catepault nonsense on my (stupid, stupid) Facebook page and it was an instant hit. Thanks again!
Very interesting. Good writing should always get the audience thinking.
Good work, sister.
Cheers
CB
And PS, I used that catepault nonsense on my (stupid, stupid) Facebook page and it was an instant hit. Thanks again!
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It'g Great. I would really love to see more soon. I like your writing style and the way you have everything flowing nicely without useless details repeated many time ever few paragraphs, which I see way to often. Brilliant.
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful work of art you are creating here. Fantastic. Please continue, I am soooooo excited!
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am starting to dislike Ms. Granger. He really was only trying to help and if she took her head out of her a** and thought it through she would notice that. I am a bit put out that there was no Severus in this chapter, hope the next chapter is soon and hopefully Ms. Granger will be a bit more appreciative that someone was looking out for her, since she is too obtuse to do it herself.
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Most happy to see you back, in any category!
Poor Hermione -- such a control freak. This does not bode well for Snape ...
Poor Hermione -- such a control freak. This does not bode well for Snape ...