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for The Gilded Cage

by ApollinaV

schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah... alas, you are truly superb. Please update soon!
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved "Yes Dear"! It fits so well with the situation. I'm glad to see Hermione and Severus are questioning their motives and feelings, such a wonderful sign, and yes finishing in two chapters would break my heart. There is so much more they need to say and DO. :-) Especially after you had me relive the push ups again. LOL Now if I could just get that vision out of my head when it pops in at the most inappropriate times! :-)

Sorry to hear about the migraine, but glad to hear you are on the mend. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, but I'm a fun nut. =] Hopefully not a pickled walnut, though; they sound slightly repulsive.
Yet another lovely chapter, I fear I may be addicted.
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh honey. I deeply sympathize. I've had migraines since I was an infant....so I've got chronic migraines. So I know all about "Evil Migraines of Death". Glad you're feeling better! Great update, I really like that you're taking the time to develop a relationship with Hermione and Severus and not just suddenly having them lust after one another and shagging like bunnies. Not that that's always a bad thing....lol! Anyway, I love it and I can't wait for more!
person Gertie
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes, The Evil Migrane of Death curse, I know it well.
I don't think I've reviewed thus far and that is a crime because I am very much enjoying this story. It is very well written and I constantly check back for updates. Please keep them coming! I love the overly stressed, spastic Hermoine and desperately want to know what information Severus is hiding. Is his incarceration self imposed? Will she move into his house? All burning questions I must know the answers to.
person Anon
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
at the rate she going she'll be living with him soon!!! hahahaha and he is enjoying her time and company and all she can do for him, lets see he got a new bed hummmm clean sheets ehhehehehehehh she goes to sleep in the drop of a hat lol gonna be some lovin soon i hope.
person jocat
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok let me just say how impressed I am with your commas! (he he). But really you are doing a wonderful job. I love how you are building up the realtionship. Its funny and totally readable at the same time. Merry Christmas and all that......
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One of the better presents I got today was the image of Severus jammed up against a wall behind an armoire! LMHO! Merry xmas, you hilarious and wonderful writer, you!
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.